Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)

根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示完成一篇短文。詞數(shù)在60—80之間。

上周，比爾和媽媽一起去購(gòu)物。他們買(mǎi)了圍巾，棉風(fēng)衣和皮鞋。后來(lái)又一起吃了日本壽司。比爾和媽媽度過(guò)了愉快的一天。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Bill’s mother likes going shopping a lot. Last Sunday she went shopping with Bill. First, they saw a beautiful scarf, so they bought it. Then they went to the Men’s Clothing Section. Bill’s mother chose a cotton windbreaker for Bill. The windbreaker made Bill look more handsome. Then they went to the Shoes and Hats Section. There they bought a pair of leather shoes for Bill’s father. After that, they went to eat Japanese sushi. They felt very tired, but they were very happy.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示寫(xiě)一篇短文，從所提供的語(yǔ)境看出敘述發(fā)生在過(guò)去的事情，因此在寫(xiě)作中要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，從整篇文章看出開(kāi)頭用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)說(shuō)明他媽媽的喜好，中間敘述過(guò)程，結(jié)尾表達(dá)自己的感受，語(yǔ)句通順，符合邏輯。