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8．根據(jù)以下提示，請以"How to Keep Healthy"為題寫一篇短文．從良好的生活習(xí)慣、適當(dāng)?shù)捏w育鍛煉以及健康的飲食習(xí)慣等方面，為"how to keep healthy"提出良好的建議．
要求：1．表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫；
2．不得使用真實的地名、校名和姓名等；
3．詞數(shù)：80左右．文章的開頭與結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
部分參考詞匯：熬夜stay up；垃圾食品junk food；均衡飲食keep a balanced diet；按時飲食have meals regularly
How to Keep Healthy
     Nowadays，more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy…
Here are three main ways to keep healthy．
Firstly，it is necessary to keep a balanced diet．We aren't supposed to eat too much junk food．It is better for us to have more fruit and vegetables every day．What's more，we are supposed to have meals regularly．Secondly，we shouldn't stay up too late．Getting enough sleep is also necessary．Finally，it is important to take regular exercise，such as swimming，jogging and so on．
In a word，we should develop a good habit of keeping healthy．
．．In this way，we can enjoy a happy life．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一 
It is better for us to have more fruit and vegetables every day．我們最好每天吃更多的水果和蔬菜． 這是it is+形容詞+for sb．to do  sth．句型，對于…來說是…的．
高分句型二
 Getting enough sleep is also necessary．獲得足夠的睡眠也是必要的． Getting enough sleep是動名詞作主語．

解答 How to Keep Healthy
　 Nowadays，more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy．Here are three main ways to keep healthy．【開頭點明主題】
Firstly，it is necessary to keep a balanced diet．We aren't supposed to eat too much junk food．It is better for us to have more fruit and vegetables every day【高分句型一，注意注意it is+形容詞+for sb．to do sth．句型的使用】What's more，we are supposed to have meals regularly．Secondly，we shouldn't stay up too late．Getting enough sleep is also necessary【高分句型二，注意動名詞的使用】．Finally，it is important to take regular exercise，such as swimming，jogging and so on．【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹如何保持健康】
In a word，we should develop a good habit of keeping healthy．In this way，we can enjoy a happy life．【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，多閱讀此類題材，將詞匯歸類整理；動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞．寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．