Question

昨天是奶奶的生日，以An interesting birthday party為題…

提示詞：1. birthday , yesterday , morning

2. go, the shop, buy , presents,

3. go , see, presents , have a good time .

4. go home until , nine o’clock , evening.

An interesting birthday party

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

It was October 12th yesterday. My friends held a birthday party for me. In the morning, they came to my home early, and they brought many presents for me. I liked them very much. I invited them to the KTV, we sang songs, danced and played games. About 5:30 p.m., we went my home. My mother had cooked a delicious dinner for us. After dinner, we watched TV and at about 8:30 p.m. we ate birthday cake.  There were fifteen candles on my birthday cake. I made a silent wish, and then I blew the candles out in one breath. I had an interesting birthday party. We had a good time in the party. I was so grateful to what they did for me.

【解析】

試題分析；這是一篇給材料作文，介紹奶奶的生日。動筆前先要先認(rèn)真閱讀提示單詞，根據(jù)單詞組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容。根據(jù)提示可知本文主要記述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，故時態(tài)主要是一般過去時態(tài)。人稱為第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)。句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)。寫作中注意敘述順序，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。文中適當(dāng)使用代詞，注意避免句式的單調(diào)重復(fù)，避免單詞及語法錯誤。

考點(diǎn)：記述文寫作

點(diǎn)評：此類作文考查的是學(xué)生基礎(chǔ)的寫作能力，主要是一些基礎(chǔ)句型的應(yīng)用。平時學(xué)習(xí)中應(yīng)注意對于一些常見句型句式的記憶，聯(lián)系默寫此類句型。對于一些比較經(jīng)典的段落，有目的的進(jìn)行背誦，考試作為參照。這尤其對于敘述的邏輯問題有很大的幫助。