Question

作為一名中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中學(xué)會(huì)幫助別人，關(guān)心他人……請(qǐng)你以 “Helping Others”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇70詞左右的短文談?wù)勀愕南敕ê途唧w做法。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

? Helping Others

???? All of us know everyone needs help and everyone can help others.

???? For example, it's our duty to clean up the classroom. We can help our classmates keep the classroom clean.

???? Our English teacher often tells us: helping others is helping ourselves! You help others today. Maybe you will get a great help from others. But I think to give is better than to receive. I like to help the people who are in trouble. His or her smile is enough.

???? To make the world more beautiful, let's help each other.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，題目只給出了主要寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，故動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀題目，確定寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是用一二人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如:for example例如；clean up打掃干凈；each other相互等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文。