Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題；每小題l分，滿(mǎn)分10分)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walk into my new high school. After registered in the classroom, the volunteer took me to my dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates, two of which arrived later. I got to know my new roommate immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say “Goodbye” to my father, but he had to leave to my hometown in the evening. I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after me and live independently. Not until then I know my senior high school life had real begun.

Answer 1

【答案】

It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I into my new high school. After in the classroom, volunteer took me to my dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates, two of arrived later. I got to know my new immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say “Goodbye” to my father, he had to leave my hometown in the evening. I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after and live independently. Not until then I know my senior high school life had begun.

【解析】

第一處：這篇文章主要使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。故walk改為walked。

第二處：介詞after后面接動(dòng)名詞。故registered改為registering。

第三處：這里泛指“一個(gè)志愿者”，用不定冠詞，volunteer是輔音音素開(kāi)頭的單詞。故the改為a。

第四處：使用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞是five roommates，定語(yǔ)從句用two of +whom引導(dǎo)。故which改為whom。

第五處：根據(jù)上文five roommates可知，作者的新室友有五個(gè)，用復(fù)數(shù)。故roommate改為roommates。

第六處：although雖然，不能和but搭配使用。故去掉but。

第七處：leave for為固定搭配，意為“動(dòng)身離開(kāi)”。故to改為for。

第八處：句意：我不得不照顧自己。使用反身代詞。故me改為myself。

第九處：Not until then放在句首，后面用部分倒裝，這篇文章使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，而且know是實(shí)義動(dòng)詞，用助動(dòng)詞did倒裝。故then 后加did。

第十處：修飾動(dòng)詞begun用副詞。故real改為really。