Question

【題目】（十七）

入冬以來全國許多地區(qū)多日被霧霾覆蓋。請根據(jù)下面表格里的提示寫一篇120詞左右的文章，文章應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：霧霾天氣產(chǎn)生的原因；霧霾天氣造成的影響；你的看法和建議（至少兩點）。開頭已給出，不進(jìn)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：霧霾 fog and haze；排放 exhaust；電廠power station

霧霾天氣產(chǎn)生的原因	霧霾天氣造成的影響	你的看法
	出行方式； 身體健康； 國家形象；	1……. 2…….

Many areas ic China have been covered by fog and haze for days in a row since winter, which causes great trouble to people’s life.

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Answer 1

【答案】

As we can see from the chart, vehicles exhaust is the first to blame, which makes up over half of the total exhaust. And industrial exhaust is another cause, which accounts for nearly 35%. Besides, gas emission from residents is about 5% and the rest is from power station.

Actually, it has brought bad effects on people’s daily life. Firstly, people’s ways of going out are great challenges now, and some of them prefer to stay at home. Secondly, the polluted air does great harm to people’s health, as a result, many diseases related have been spread throughout the whole nation.Finally, the bad living environment has even ruined the image of our country.

Personally, it’s time that we took some prompt measures to address the problem.For one thing, people should strengthen awareness of environmental protection from every detail in life, for another, stricter laws and regulations should be made by the government. Only in this way can we live healthily.

【解析】本文是篇圖表材料類作文，材料主旨意圖明顯，學(xué)生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的�？忌�在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，依次完成寫作的要求。首先要從圖表出發(fā)闡明造成霧霾現(xiàn)象的原因，要注意文章的時態(tài)，所有要點都是對客觀事實的描述所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時；接著需要根據(jù)要點提示寫好影響，需要適當(dāng)?shù)恼归_；最后發(fā)表自己的個人觀點主要就如何處理與解決問題，這個寫作過程中需要注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。