Question

15．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)給你的美國外教Chris寫一封郵件，告訴他你打算去看京劇，希望他一起參加．郵件的內(nèi)容包括
1．介紹此次活動(dòng)的相關(guān)內(nèi)容（例如：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等）；
2．說明你打算參加的原因；
3．詢問對(duì)方的意向．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于50；
 2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)．
Dear Chris，
                              
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型
1、A Beijing Opera named Kongchengji will be shown in the National Grand Theater at 2：00p．m．on July 1st．一出名為《空城計(jì)》的京劇將于七月一日下午2點(diǎn)在國家大劇院上演．
named為name的過去分詞，過去分詞含有被動(dòng)的含義，意為"被命名為…"
be shown為被動(dòng)語態(tài)，be/get done表示被動(dòng)．
2、After enjoying it，you will know more about the traditional culture．在欣賞完這出京劇之后，你就會(huì)更加了解中國傳統(tǒng)文化．
after enjoying it，在句中做時(shí)間狀語，相當(dāng)于 after you enjoy it．

解答 Dear Chris，
I have good news to tell you．（高分句型一）A Beijing Opera named Kongchengji will be shown in the National Grand Theater at 2：00p．m．on July 1st．I want to watch it because Beijing Opera is a kind of traditional art in China and I'm very interested in it．I know you also like the Chinese culture，especially Beijing Opera，so I would like to invite you to appreciate it with me．Would you like to come with me？（高分句型二）After enjoying it，you will know more about the traditional culture．（說明寫信原因）
Looking forward to your early reply．（詢問對(duì)方意向）
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)充分利用提綱寫好每個(gè)要點(diǎn)的主題句，因該文字?jǐn)?shù)要求較少，所以主題句應(yīng)緊扣主題，言簡意賅，根據(jù)提綱選擇與其關(guān)系最密切的，最易表達(dá)的，也最有說服力的例子來進(jìn)行擴(kuò)展．
優(yōu)先闡明寫信目的，因本文要求字?jǐn)?shù)較少，所以在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)減少使用簡單句來一一描述，盡量使用復(fù)合句，并注意所寫句子的準(zhǔn)確性，做到言簡意賅．