Question

My hometown is a pretty city，so people there are    
kind and  polite. With coming of spring，grass and 　　　    
trees turn green，and flowers grew in many colors.　         
In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more　       
beautiful. After autumn arrives，the city looks as an 　      
old man with leaves fallen from the trees. In winter，　     
a lot of white birds come to my city for food. I　can　      
wait more patiently above the sea for quite a long　　　     
time. While they find fish come to the surface, they　　     
fly down immediate and catch them without delay.             
That is my city, and I love it so much.

Answer 1

【小題1】so改為and 
【小題2】With后加the
【小題3】grew改為grow
【小題4】skies改為sky
【小題5】as改為like
【小題6】fallen改為falling
【小題7】I改為They
【小題8】more改為much
【小題9】While改為When
【小題10】immediate改為immediately

解析【小題1】根據(jù)上下句的關(guān)系應(yīng)用and表示順承。
【小題2】此處特指即將到來的春天。
【小題3】根據(jù)行文需要，此處應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時。
【小題4】sky無復(fù)數(shù)形式。
【小題5】表示“看上去像……”應(yīng)用look like。
【小題6】表示“正在落下的”應(yīng)用falling。
【小題7】指代前文的birds用復(fù)數(shù)。
【小題8】此處沒有比較的意思，不用more。
【小題9】表示“當(dāng)……時”用When。
【小題10】修飾動詞短語ny down應(yīng)用副詞。