Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你生活中的一個(gè)事例用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

A good state of mind is the base of success.

注意：①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；

②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；

③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例；

④文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名及班級(jí)名稱(chēng)；

⑤詞數(shù)為120左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Life is complicated. We can’t avoid anything annoying or stressful. Therefore, what is of great importance is that we should keep a good state of mind.

An experience never fades from my memory. With a vital exam drawing near, I felt so nervous that I even couldn’t eat or sleep,thus making me very sleepy in class. Seeing this, my teacher came to my help. With her aid, I adjusted myself and felt confident again. In the meantime, a detailed plan was made to go over my lessons. In the end, I managed to pass the exam.

It was a good state of mind that helped me get through the exam . A good state of mind is what it takes to realize our goal. Whenever your emotion is out of control, just keep in mind that only by possessing a good state of mind can you attain success.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作,開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】With a vital exam drawing near, I felt so nervous that I even couldn’t eat or sleep,thus making me very sleepy in class.這句話有with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，so…that…句型，和現(xiàn)在分詞做結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)，是個(gè)有力的增分點(diǎn)，

Seeing this, my teacher came to my help.這句話也是現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)，It was a good state of mind that helped me get through the exam .這是強(qiáng)調(diào)句，A good state of mind is what it takes to realize our goal.這句話里面有表語(yǔ)從句， Whenever your emotion is out of control, just keep in mind that only by possessing a good state of mind can you attain success.這句話是有讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，和倒裝句，總之，范圍使用大量高中教材中出現(xiàn)的高級(jí)短語(yǔ)和句型，考生應(yīng)該能做到學(xué)以致用。

考點(diǎn)：考查開(kāi)放式作文