Question

4．最近，網(wǎng)絡(luò)上有人發(fā)起了一份有關(guān)老人摔倒后你是否會(huì)扶的調(diào)查問(wèn)卷．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列圖示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文發(fā)表在學(xué)校的英語(yǔ)報(bào)上．

1．簡(jiǎn)要描述圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容；
2．分析調(diào)查結(jié)果；
3．提出你的看法．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：120-150；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
They think helping others，especially those who are in trouble，is Chinese traditional virtue．
他們認(rèn)為幫助他人尤其是那種陷入麻煩的人是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德．
高分句型二：
In my opinion，we should make every effort to help old people when they fall down．
在我看來(lái)，我們應(yīng)該盡我們的最大努力去幫助老人當(dāng)他們摔倒的時(shí)候．
句型一  those who are in trouble 該句是一個(gè)由who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，who在從句中充當(dāng)主語(yǔ)，替代先行詞those
句型二 we should make every effort to help old people when they fall down..該句的謂語(yǔ)部分使用了重要的短語(yǔ)：make every effort to do sth 盡力做某事 when they fall down 該句為when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句

解答 Recently a website carried out a survey about"Whether we should help old people get up when they fall down"among their students．（提出主題）
   The survey shows that 19% of the students offered a positive answer．They think helping others，especially those who are in trouble，is Chinese traditional virtue．（高分句型一）About 42% of them are unwilling to help those old people who fall down．Soem think because they lack medical knowledge，they can't give those old people help，or that can even cause further injures．The others are afraid of extra trouble．For example they are afraid they are cheated．The left people say it's difficult to decide whehter should they offer the help．（說(shuō)明原因）
   In my opinion，we should make every effort to help old people when they fall down．（高分句型二） It's our responsibility to help others，especially old people and children when they need help．If we lack medical knowledge，we should help them call their family or call 120．（提出建議）

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