Question

11．作為一名中學(xué)生，和老師建立良好的師生關(guān)系是必要的．請(qǐng)你圍繞這個(gè)話題，根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ?br />1．建立良好的師生關(guān)系的必要性．
2．你認(rèn)為良好的師生關(guān)系應(yīng)該是怎樣的？
3．如何才能建立這種關(guān)系？
注意：詞數(shù)120左右，開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
As a middle school student，it is necessary to build a good relationship with our teachers．              ．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一篇英語短文．就‘作為一名中學(xué)生，怎樣和老師建立良好的師生關(guān)系'談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ?br />寫作時(shí)人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．建立良好的師生關(guān)系的必要性；2．你認(rèn)為良好的師生關(guān)系應(yīng)該是怎樣的 3．如何才能建立這種關(guān)系．
重要短語：build a good relationship with （建立良好的關(guān)系），show love and concern for sb（對(duì)某人關(guān)愛和關(guān)心…），seek support and advice（尋求支撐和幫助），benefit sb（對(duì)某人有益），in one's opinion （某人認(rèn)為），be filled with （充滿），exchange ideas freely（交換想法），joint efforts （合力），enjoy a friendly relationship（享受健康的關(guān)系）．
【高分句型一】
1．①It is necessary to build a good relationship with our teachers，for it is the teachers ②who show love and concern for us students in study and life and they are good listeners．
①此處是由"it"引導(dǎo)的形式主語，結(jié)構(gòu)為"It+be+形容詞+to do sth"．
②此處是關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為"the teachers"，關(guān)系代詞"who"在從句中作主語．
【高分句型二】
2．We students can always seek support and advice from them，from which we can benefit and learn a lot．
①此處為"介詞+關(guān)系代詞which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，主句為"We students can always seek support and advice from them"，"which"指代前面主句中的"support and advice"．
【高分句型三】
3．Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a friendly relationship between teachers and students．
此處是由"Only【狀語成分：從句/時(shí)間副詞/介詞短語】+一般疑問句形式"構(gòu)成的部分倒裝．

解答 As a middle school student，it is necessary to build a good relationship with our teachers，for it is the teachers who show love and concern for us students in study and life and they are good listeners．【高分句型一】We students can always seek support and advice from them，from which we can benefit and learn a lot．【高分句型二】（建立良好的師生關(guān)系的必要性）
     Therefore an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important．In my opinion，this relationship should be one filled with love，care，understanding，and respect，so we can exchange ideas freely．（你認(rèn)為良好的師生關(guān)系應(yīng)該是怎樣的）To build a relationship of this kind，teachers should become friends of students while students ought to trust our teachers and express our feeling frankly．Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a friendly relationship between teachers and students．【高分句型三】（如何才能建立這種關(guān)系）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．