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IV. 寫(xiě)作(共兩節(jié)，滿分40分)
第一節(jié)：基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作（滿分15分）
[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下的情景說(shuō)明，使用5個(gè)規(guī)范的句子描述全部所給的信息內(nèi)容。
假設(shè)你是一名導(dǎo)游，將帶團(tuán)到廣東霞山。出發(fā)前你對(duì)美國(guó)游客們簡(jiǎn)單介紹
當(dāng)天的行程和其他事項(xiàng)。
(1)、霞山位于廣東北部，距廣州280公里，乘車(chē)6小時(shí)；
(2)、在韶關(guān)市停留一小時(shí)，吃午飯；
(3)、下午5點(diǎn)到南雄，晚宿南雄賓館，第二天去游玩霞山；
(4)、路途遙遠(yuǎn)，艱難，但沿途你會(huì)介紹美景和趣聞讓游客忘記疲勞。
[寫(xiě)作要求]
(1)只能使用5個(gè)句子介紹以上全部?jī)?nèi)容；       (2)短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)］句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性和復(fù)雜度；信息內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性。Ladies and gentlemen,
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Ladies and gentlemen,
Xia Mountains, about 280 kilometers away from Guangzhou, is located in the north of Guangdong Province. It will take us 6 hours to get there. At noon, stopping in Shaoguan City for an hour to have our lunch, we will reach another city — Nanxiong at 5 o’clock in the afternoon and for the night there, and, by the way, we will climb Xixia Mountains next morning.
Although the trip to Xia Mountains is a bit long and difficult, the beautiful scenery and interesting things on the way will catch you eyes and help get rid of your tiredness. Besides, from time to time, I’ll give you a brief account of Xia Mountains.

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