Question

14．假如英語課上老師要求同學們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10 處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉．
    修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
    2．只允許修改10 處，多者（從第11 處起）不計分．
Yesterday I attended a classmate party．I was very happy to see my old friends，that I hadn't met for years．So I drank a lot．After the party，I drive home though my classmate had tried to persuade me not to．I always believed that as a skilled driver，drinking a little did no harm to driving．On the way to home，the wine began to take effect．All of sudden，I cracked my car against a sign on the road． Luckily，a policeman came towards me．He fined me and said："Drunk driving is a terribly thing．You can end up hurt yourself，and other innocent people life．"Till then，I realized that the effects of drunk driving could be deadly for all those involved．Many people who drink and drive do not think of the serious consequences of their action unless it is too late．So I appeal to everybody never to
drink and drive!Cherish your life!

Answer 1

分析 昨天我去參加同學聚會，看到多年不見的朋友很開心，所以多喝了幾杯．聚會結束后，盡管同學們都勸我不要開車，但我還是開車回家，我對自己的車技有信心．路上，酒開始發(fā)作．突然，我撞到了路邊的指示牌，更糟糕的是，警察朝我走來．付款并且告誡我，酒駕是很可怕的，害人害己．直到那時我才意識到酒駕要人命�。�

解答 Yesterday I attended a classmate party．I was very happy to see my old friends，that I hadn't met for years．
                                                                                                                       who/whom
So I drank a lot．After the party，I drive home though my classmate had tried to persuade me not to．
                                                     drove                         classmates
I always believed that as a skilled driver，drinking a little did no harm to driving．On the way to home，
                                                                                                                                         去掉
the wine began to take effect．All of∧sudden，I cracked my car against a sign on the road．
                                                    加a
Luckily，a policeman came towards me．He fined me and said："Drunk driving is a terribly thing．
Unluckily                                                                                                           terrible
You can end up hurt yourself，and other innocent people life．"Till then，I realized that the effects of 
                       hurting                                        people's
drunk driving could be deadly for all those involved．Many people who drink

and drive do not think of the serious consequences of their action unless it is too late．
                                                                                                until
So I appeal to everybody never todrink and drive!Cherish your life!
1．that改為who/whom．非限制性定語從句不能用that來連接，先行詞是人，要用who，句中是作賓語，也可以用whom．
2．drive改為drove．文章講述的是過去事情，要用一般過去時態(tài)．
3．classmate改為classmates．句意表達是很多同學，要用復數(shù)．
4．to去掉．home是副詞，不能加介詞．
5．加a．短語搭配，all of a sudden突然．
6．Luckily改為Unluckily．句意表達是否定，不幸的，不走運的．
7．terribly改為terrible．句中修飾的是名詞thing，要用形容詞．
8．hurt改為hurting．短語搭配，end up doing sth最終，以某事告終．
9．people改為people's．句意表達的是所有關系，innocent people's life無辜人的生命．
10．unless改為until．句型搭配，not…until…直到…才…

點評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎知識．�？嫉闹�識點有：名詞（單復數(shù)錯誤），動詞（時態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉換），代詞（指代錯誤），形容詞和副詞（轉換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤；找錯誤要以動詞為主，動詞或與動詞有關的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分．