Question

5．如何衡量一個(gè)人真正的品質(zhì)，不同的人有不同的看法．請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的引語(yǔ)，結(jié)合圖片所提示的信息，按要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文．
"The measure of a man's real character is what he would do if he knew he would never be found out．"
-Thomas Macaulay
  
內(nèi)容要求：
1．你對(duì)該引語(yǔ)的理解；2．舉例說(shuō)明；3．恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾．
注意：
1．內(nèi)容至少包括一幅圖片信息；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；
3．詞數(shù)：120左右；短文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：self-discipline n．自律；self-disciplined adj．自律的

This quotation from Thomas Macaulay tells us thatThis quotation from Thomas Macaulay tells us that it isself-discipline that reflects a man's real character．Therefore，we should beself-disciplined anytime even if we know that our behavior will never be foundout．
For example，when taking exams，we should be self-disciplined enough and not cheat．For another，it is essential for us tolearn to control ourselves well on the Internet．We can't be addicted to computer games or bad information，nor can we use theInternetto attack others immorally and illegally．In addition，through self-discipline weshould avoid and resist different kinds of temptations，which is of great help toprevent corruptions．
In conclusion，being self-disciplined not only helps us improve ourselves，but contributes to buildingup a harmonious and civilized society．As the saying goes，the day has eyes and the night has ears．We should make a reasonablechoice about what to do wherever and whenever we are．．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"圖片+提綱類(lèi)"形式，根據(jù)文章圖片和所給提示信息寫(xiě)一篇短文，闡述對(duì)一個(gè)人真正的品質(zhì)理解．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．對(duì)該引語(yǔ)的理解；2．舉例說(shuō)明；3．恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾．既是看圖作文又是提綱類(lèi)作文．
寫(xiě)作時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱(chēng)以第三人稱(chēng)為主．
重要短語(yǔ)：reflect sth （反映某物），even if（即使），control oneself （自控），be addicted to（上癮），attack sb （攻擊，襲擊），in addition （除…之外還），resisttemptations（抵制誘惑），be of greathelp （有很多幫助），inconclusion（總之），contribute to（貢獻(xiàn)），building upa society （構(gòu)建和諧社會(huì)），make a choice（做出選擇）．
【高分句型】

     1．This quotation from Thomas Macaulay tells us ①that it is self-discipline that reflects a man's real character ②．
 ①這里是由that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，主句的主語(yǔ)是This quotation from Thomas Macaulay，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞是 tells．
 ②這里是強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，其結(jié)構(gòu)為"It is/was+強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that…"．
2．nor can we use the Internet to attack others immorally and illegally．
這里是部分倒裝，其結(jié)構(gòu)為"否定詞+一般疑問(wèn)句形式"．
3．when taking exams，we should be self-disciplined enough and not cheat．

這里是時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的省略，由"連詞+現(xiàn)在分詞"構(gòu)成，主句為we should be self-disciplined enough and not cheat，主句的主語(yǔ)與動(dòng)詞take存在邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系．

解答 This quotation from ThomasMacaulay tells us that it is self-discipline that reflects a man's realcharacter．【高分句型】Therefore，we should beself-disciplined anytime even if we know that our behavior will never be foundout．（對(duì)引語(yǔ)的理解）
For example，when taking exams，we should be self-disciplined enough and not cheat．【高分句型】For another，it is essential for us to learn to control ourselves well onthe Internet．We can't be addicted to computer games or bad information，nor can we use theInternet to attack others immorally and illegally．【高分句型】In addition，through self-discipline we should avoid and resist differentkinds of temptations，which is of great help to prevent corruptions．（舉例說(shuō)明）
In conclusion，being self-disciplined not only helps us improve ourselves，but contributes to buildingup a harmonious and civilized society．As the saying goes，the day has eyes and the night has ears．We should make a reasonablechoice about what to do wherever and whenever we are．（恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)作看圖作文時(shí)，首先認(rèn)真看圖，結(jié)合圖片和文字，確定所要表達(dá)的主題是什么，然后圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，合理想象，對(duì)譯出的要點(diǎn)通過(guò)合理的組合，加上必要的連接詞使表達(dá)連貫．同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．