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4．目前，學(xué)校普遍存在部分同學(xué)成績(jī)落后的現(xiàn)象．假設(shè)你是班長(zhǎng)，班主任請(qǐng)你對(duì)班上這種現(xiàn)象在班會(huì)上作一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)短發(fā)言，分析成績(jī)落后的原因，并提出你的建議．發(fā)言稿內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

主要原因	對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)缺乏信心
	沒有集中精力學(xué)習(xí)
	尚未養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣
	…
建議	…

注意：1．發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
      2．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文連貫；
      3．詞數(shù)不少于100．
Nowadays quite a few of us are falling behind with our studies．               ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
some of us are unable to devote ourselves to （1）our studies，wasting （2）much time playing（3）computer games．我們有些人不能專注于學(xué)習(xí)，浪費(fèi)了大量的時(shí)間玩電腦游戲．
（1）devote oneself to致力于；專注于
（2）wasting是現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語(yǔ)，表示與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞are unable to 同時(shí)存在的動(dòng)作或狀態(tài)．
（3）waste time doing 浪費(fèi)時(shí)間做…
句型二：
Furthermore（1），it's fundamental that （2）we concentrate our mind and attention on our studies．
（1）furthermore此外，而且
（2）It's fundamental that：…是根本的；該句式屬于"It's+adj+that"，從句中的動(dòng)詞用虛擬語(yǔ)氣，用"（should）+do"．
句型三：
Only by living up to（1）the suggestions above can we （2）expect to make great progress and achieve good results．
（1）live up to達(dá)到高標(biāo)準(zhǔn)； 不辜負(fù)； 實(shí)行； 履行
（2）"Only+狀語(yǔ)"放在句首，句子用倒裝語(yǔ)序，所以用"can we…"．

解答 Nowadays quite a few of US are falling behind with our studies．
There are some reasons for the phenomenon．Firstly，lacking confidence in ourselves is a major factor．Secondly，some of us are unable to devote ourselves to our studies，wasting much time playing computer games【高分句型一】．Thirdly，failing to form good learning habits like taking notes，concentrating and reviewing contributes to the problem（分析原因）．
To change the present situation，we should not only be fully aware of the importance of studying but also build up self-confidence．Furthermore，it's fundamental thatwe concentrate our mind and attention on our studies【高分句型二】．At the same time，developing good study habits is a must．Only by living up to the suggestions above can we expect to make great progress and achieve good results【高分句型三】（建議）．
That's all．Thank you．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫作時(shí)首先審題要到位：審體裁、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)；審要點(diǎn)：本文中提出三個(gè)原因，針對(duì)原因提出建議．其次要考慮高分詞語(yǔ)和句型的選用，從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、倒裝、強(qiáng)調(diào)句型等都是可考慮的高級(jí)句型；詞語(yǔ)和句型的選用要包含作者的感情色彩和增強(qiáng)表達(dá)的氣勢(shì)；再次，運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流暢．