Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文 中共 有 10 處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或 修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫岀該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫岀修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改 10 處，多者(從第 11 處起)不計分。

My uncle, who had been working in a hospital in our city, is great success as a doctor. Last night I went to visit him and told him I was in low spirits because he had failed the maths test again. After hearing that I said, he told me that when he was at school, he wanted to be a doctor. He worked very harder at his lessons and tried to enter to a university. However, something unhappy happened to his family, it forced him to work for a life. But he spent his spare time studying or finally became a doctor. “The secret of success,” he said, “are to never give up whatever difficulty you may meet with in the future.”

Answer 1

【答案】1. had → has

2.在great前面加a

3. he → I

4. that →what

5. harder → hard

6.去掉to

7. it → which

8. life → living

9. or → and

10. are → is

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章講述了，作者因數(shù)學(xué)考試不及格去找當(dāng)醫(yī)生的叔叔開解，叔叔用自己的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷激勵作者不要灰心。

1. 考查時態(tài)。此處指“我叔叔一直在我市的一家醫(yī)院工作”，過去發(fā)生延續(xù)到現(xiàn)在還要持續(xù)下去的動作，用現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時（has/have been doing），主語My uncle是單數(shù)。故將had改為has。

2. 考查冠詞。此處指“我叔叔當(dāng)醫(yī)生是一件非常成功的事”，success指“成功”時，不可數(shù)名詞，指“一件成功的事或人”時，是可數(shù)名詞，在本句中success指“一件成功的事”，是可數(shù)名詞，表泛指，great不以元音音素開頭，要加不定冠詞a。故在great前面加a。

3. 考查代詞。此處指“因為我數(shù)學(xué)考試又不及格”，應(yīng)用代詞I。故將he改為I。

4. 考查賓語從句引導(dǎo)詞。hear后接一個賓語從句，從句缺乏賓語，表“……的事物、什么”，應(yīng)用連接代詞what。故將that改為what。

5. 考查副詞。此處指“他很努力地學(xué)習(xí)功課，想考上大學(xué)”，本句并無比較的含義，無需用比較級，應(yīng)用副詞原級。故將harder改為 hard。

6. 考查及物動詞。enter是及物動詞，后面直接加名詞，不用介詞。故去掉to。

7. 考查非限制性定語從句關(guān)系詞。本句為非限制性定語從句，先行詞是句子something unhappy happened to his family，指物，在從句中作主語，應(yīng)用關(guān)系代詞which。故將it改為which。

8. 考查名詞。此處指“然而，他的家庭發(fā)生了一些不幸的事情，迫使他以工作謀生�！北硎尽爸\生、生計”，應(yīng)用名詞living。故將life改為living。

9. 考查連詞。此處指“但他把業(yè)余時間花在了學(xué)習(xí)上，并且最終成為了一名醫(yī)生。”前后兩句表并列順承，應(yīng)用并列連詞and。故將or改為and。

10. 考查主謂一致。主語The secret of success是單數(shù)，主謂一致，謂語也用單數(shù)形式。故將are改為is。