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【題目】現(xiàn)在，越來越多的年輕人喜歡在網(wǎng)上點餐或打電話叫外賣，不愿意自己做飯，就這一現(xiàn)象結(jié)合下面的提示寫一篇100詞左右的短文。

1. 陳述現(xiàn)象；

2. 此現(xiàn)象的原因（至少2點）；

3. 你個人的看法和選擇。

注意： 1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．行文連貫，語篇完整；

3．文中不得透露個人真實信息。

參考詞匯：take-out restaurant 外賣店，外賣餐館

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Answer 1

【答案】

Possible version

Nowadays, a growing number of young people would rather order food on the Internet or call a take-out restaurant for meals than cook at home.

It’s not surprising for them to do so. For one thing, with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster, time is quite precious. In their eyes, it is unnecessary to take time to cook. For another thing, home cooking food is simpler in kind and less delicious, especially for those who are particular about food.

In my view, our health is closely related to what we eat. The busier we are, the more attention we should pay to food. Therefore, I prefer to cook food at home and go on a balanced diet.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是提綱類話題作文，要求對現(xiàn)在的年輕人喜歡在網(wǎng)上點餐或打電話叫外賣，不愿意自己做飯這一現(xiàn)象進行評論。提綱要點已給出，根據(jù)提綱，文章可分三段來寫：第一段陳述現(xiàn)象，此段要簡短；第二段分析原因，注意至少講出兩點；第三段談自己的看法和選擇。成文時應(yīng)注意以下幾點：(1)內(nèi)容要點齊全。(2)人稱使用要恰當(dāng)。(3)時態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。(4)適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當(dāng)使用一些高級詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。

【亮點說明】1.使用高級句型：would rather do than do 結(jié)構(gòu)：a growing number of young people would rather order food on the Internet or call a take-out restaurant for meals than cook at home；獨立結(jié)構(gòu)with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster隨著現(xiàn)代生活節(jié)奏越來越快；定語從句 especially for those who are particular about food；賓語從句our health is closely related to what we eat.2.使用了過渡詞語：For one thing,For another thing. In my view，Therefore. 3.使用了重要短語：are particular about講究，對挑剔，is closely related to和…緊密相關(guān)。