Question

【題目】假定你是一名中學生,名叫張華。一家英文報社來信邀請你調查一下中學生對網絡使用的情況,并依據調查寫一篇報道。請根據下表提供的信息，對你的調查作簡要介紹，發(fā)給報社。

主要用途	出現的問題
閱讀國內外新聞，學習英語。 發(fā)e-mail，欣賞音樂，看電影，玩游戲等。 網上購物。	1. 過多的在網上玩游戲，浪費了時間，影響了學業(yè)。 2. 瀏覽不健康信息，對身心有害。

注意：詞數：100左右 2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you something about how the students use the Internet.

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Yours truly

Zhang Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you something about how the students use the Internet. As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. Many students often read news at home and abroad and learn foreign languages by ourselves on the Internet. Sometimes we send e-mails to our families as well as our friends. Besides, we listen to music, enjoy films and play computer games on it. We can even do shopping without leaving our homes.

However, it has its disadvantages. Many students waste too much time playing the electronic games, which has a bad effect on their studies. What’s worse, the bad information on the Internet does great harm to them, I hope every student can make use of the Internet properly for their studies.

Yours truly

Zhang Hua

【解析】本篇作文涵蓋了所有的要點（網絡的主要用途和網絡使用中出現的問題）：主要用途有：（1）閱讀國內外新聞，學習英語read news at home and abroad and learn foreign languages by ourselves on the Internet（2）發(fā)e-mails、欣賞音樂、看電影玩游戲send e-mails to our families as well as our friends. Besides, we listen to music, enjoy films and play computer games on it（3）網上購物do shopping。

出現的問題：（4）過多的在網上玩網上游戲，浪費了時間，影響了學業(yè)。waste too much time playing the electronic games, which has a bad effect on their studies.（5）游覽不健康信息，對身心有害。

靈活使用了多種句式。

名詞從句：I’m writing to tell you something about how the students use the Internet.

定語從句：（1）As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life

（2）Many students waste too much time playing the electronic games, which has a bad effect on their studies.

非謂語：We can even do shopping without leaving our homes.

　使用了高級詞匯：at home and abroad ，by ourselves ，What’s worse ，do great harm to；make use of。

使用了一些連詞和副詞。However,What’s worse，Besides等。