Question

【題目】假如你是高一新生李華，請你根據(jù)以下要點，給你的美國朋友Tom寫一封信，介紹你的高一英語老師Miss Lin：教我們兩個多月了；美麗、活潑、善良；有耐心，上課生動形象易于理解；在課上，很嚴(yán)厲，沒人敢在她的課上說話；課下與學(xué)生們相處很好，都喜歡與她交談；良師益友。
可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫，字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。
Dear Tom,
I'm so happy to write to tell you something about my new English teacher, Miss Lin.
Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I'm so happy to write to tell you something about my new English teacher, Miss Lin.

She has been teaching us for about two months. She is very beautiful, kind and seems to be active all the time. She is also patient and her class is lively and interesting. She can explain everything so clearly that all of us can understand. However, she is strict with us in class. In fact, no one dare speak in her class unless she tells us to. But after class, she gets on well with us. She often talks about our studies, our families and so on. All of us enjoy talking with her. She is not only our teacher but also our good friend.

Can you tell me something about your school and teachers?

Look forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本題是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李華的身份給美國朋友Tom寫一封信，介紹你的高一英語老師Miss Lin，寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱作文。要寫好提綱作文要避免不假思索地圍繞提綱堆砌材料，寫一些“不痛不癢”的句子，或者將中文提綱簡單地譯成英文，或者將英文提綱生硬地搬到作文里。提綱作文不是簡單地重復(fù)提綱材料的過程，而是在提綱材料的基礎(chǔ)上，合理巧妙地構(gòu)思全文，充分表現(xiàn)主題。