1.假如你叫王宇,明年六月份將從晨曦中學(xué)畢業(yè),打算到耶魯大學(xué)(Yale University)上學(xué).現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表的個(gè)人信息,用英語(yǔ)寫一封信,申請(qǐng)留學(xué)并索要申請(qǐng)材料.
姓名:王宇性別:男出生年月:2000年5月
畢業(yè)學(xué)校:晨曦中學(xué)學(xué)業(yè):各門功課優(yōu)秀
申請(qǐng)?jiān)盒#阂敶髮W(xué)申請(qǐng)專業(yè):財(cái)務(wù)管理(financial management)
興趣愛(ài)好:書法(calligraphy)、英語(yǔ)和籃球電子郵箱:wangyu05@sina.com
注意:1.信件必須包括以上內(nèi)容,不要逐句翻譯,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫;
2.詞數(shù):100個(gè)左右.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).
Dear Sir or Madam
I'm writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in financial management in your university.First,please allow me to make a brief introduction of myself.I'm Wang Yu,a boy born in May,2000.I'm graduating from the Chen Xi Middle School next June.I'm an all-A student with a keen interest in calligraphy and playing basketball.(高分句型一)Besides,I'm good at English.I know that The Yale University is ranked among the most famous universities in the USA,and that's the very reason why I'm now applying to further my university study in your Financial Management Department.(高分句型二)
I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials.(高分句型三)By the way,my email address is wangyu05@sina.com.
Looking forward to your reply.
Your sincerely,
Wang Yu.

分析 本文是一篇書信體裁的書面表達(dá),要注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、注意書信的格式,而且書信的語(yǔ)言要簡(jiǎn)潔明了,開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山提出寫信的目的.2、題目要求很詳細(xì),注意不要遺漏表格中的信息,同時(shí)題文就是文章的寫作目的.3、寫信時(shí)語(yǔ)言要自然流暢,禮貌委婉,在內(nèi)容方面可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫,4、為了提高檔次還要注意句式的變換.
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本篇書面表達(dá)格式正確,作者第一句話就開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山的提出了自己寫信的目的,文章全面涵蓋了所有要點(diǎn),語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔明了、自然流暢.運(yùn)用了許多句式,如I'm writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance 是in the hope that的從句,I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information運(yùn)用了I would appreciate it if…的句式.詞匯的運(yùn)用也恰當(dāng)合理,如further my study中的further是運(yùn)用為動(dòng)詞,make a brief introduction簡(jiǎn)單介紹,an all-A student三好學(xué)生,a keen interest in熱切的興趣,have a good command of 對(duì)…有良好的掌握,rich experience豐富的經(jīng)歷.同時(shí),一些連接詞和短語(yǔ)如First,By the way,的使用也使文章更有條理性,銜接更加順暢.

解答 Dear Sir or Madam,
       I'm writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in Financial Management in your university.
       First,please allow me to make a brief introduction of myself.I'm Wang Yu,a boy born in May,1994.I'm graduating from the Chen Xi Middle School next June.I'm an all-A student with a keen interest in calligraphy and playing basketball.(高分句型一)Besides,I'm good at English.I know that The Yale University is ranked among the most famous universities in the USA,and that's the very reason why I'm now applying to further my university study in your Financial Management Department.(高分句型二)
       I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials.(高分句型三)By the way,my email address is wangyu05@sina.com
       Looking forward to your reply.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours sincerely,
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Wang Yu

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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