假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意:1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Dear Brad ,

I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school . I feel uneasily recently . At home I feel like prisoner . I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet . The only thing I have to do it is studying . Every time I got a low mark , my parents will scold me sharply . There's a generation gap among my parents and me , but it's always difficult to communicate . Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful , isn't it ? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a good university ? I am very unhappy and lost. I need your help .

Best wishes,

Li Ping

 

【答案】

 

 grades→grade

 uneasily→uneasy

 like 后面加a

 it 去掉

 got→get

 among→between

 but→so/and

 are→is

 How→Why

 entering→enter

【解析】

試題分析:本篇短文講述的是一個(gè)高中生的苦惱。在家里父母對(duì)他要求非常嚴(yán)格,不允許看電視或上網(wǎng),而且只要考試成績(jī)不理想父母都會(huì)對(duì)他進(jìn)行嚴(yán)厲的責(zé)罰。他不知道如何和父母進(jìn)行溝通,感到有點(diǎn)迷茫,希望得到別人的幫助。

 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school 。grades前面有序數(shù)詞first 修飾表示第一,不用復(fù)數(shù)形式,所以把grades改為grade。

 考查形容詞。I feel uneasily recently。 Feel在此為系動(dòng)詞“感覺(jué)”,后面應(yīng)該用形容詞做表語(yǔ),故把uneasily改為uneasy。

 考查冠詞。I feel like prisoner。 Prisoner是可數(shù)名詞,在此表示單數(shù)概念,所以在like 后面加a 。

 考查定語(yǔ)從句。I have to do it is studying I have to do 是定語(yǔ)從句,省略了做賓語(yǔ)的關(guān)系代詞that,而it 的存在使句子成分重復(fù),所以把it去掉。

 考查時(shí)態(tài)。Every time I got a low mark文章敘述現(xiàn)在的情況,所以應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),所以把got改為get。

 考查介詞。There's a generation gap among my parents and me此處指的是父母和“我”之間的代溝,而among常用于三者之間,所以把a(bǔ)mong改為between。

 考查連詞。but it's always difficult to communicate前后句子間沒(méi)有轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,所以把but改為so或者and。

 考查主謂一致。Life are supposed to be colorful Life 是不可數(shù)名詞“生活”,所以謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該用單數(shù),故把a(bǔ)re改為is。

 考查疑問(wèn)詞。How should I devote all my time 。從語(yǔ)境可知此處作者是不想把所有的時(shí)間精力放到學(xué)習(xí)上,所以問(wèn)的是原因,How改為Why。

 考查非謂語(yǔ)。so as to entering a good university 。So as to 后面跟動(dòng)詞原形表示目的,所以把entering改為enter。

考點(diǎn):考查短文改錯(cuò)。

 

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