Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的加拿大朋友Allen來信詢問你校學(xué)生參與勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)的情況。請(qǐng)給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐內(nèi)容（如家務(wù)勞動(dòng)、校園勞動(dòng)、校外勞動(dòng)等）及其意義；

2. 你最常參與的勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，并談?wù)劯惺堋?/span>

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Allen,

Through the community volunteer service as a group, we are inspired to find a bright spot in the voluntary labor that can make us receive education and feel something, and guide us to understand the society and feel the society. In the nursing home, we talked with the old man as much as we could and tried our best to make him feel warm. We also help the staff to clean the nursing home together. And that kind of pride is not something you can feel in school. Our school regards the society as a place of practice, and lets us participate in the society, which has some enlightenment from the practice of voluntary labor.

Public welfare labor is selfless labor, but also cultivate our enthusiasm about public works.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封書信：假定你是李華，你的加拿大朋友Allen來信詢問你校學(xué)生參與勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)的情況.請(qǐng)給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1 .勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐內(nèi)容（如家務(wù)勞動(dòng)、校園勞動(dòng)、校外勞動(dòng)等）及其意義；2.你最常參與的勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，并談?wù)劯惺堋?/span>

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：Through the community volunteer service as a group(作為一個(gè)團(tuán)體通過社區(qū)志愿者服務(wù))；guide us to understand the society and feel the society(引導(dǎo)我們了解社會(huì)，感受社會(huì))；lets us participate in the society(讓我們參與社會(huì))等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。