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4．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
      2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan．Like everyone knows，it's famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals．The weather was fine．It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain．The three of them were very excited．As we climbed the mountain，we fed monkeys，visiting temples and told stories．On the way down I was busy taking pictures since the scenery was so beautiful．The time passes quickly．Evening came．We spent the night in a hotel in the top of the mountain．The food was expensive and the service was good．I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow．

Answer 1

分析 作者和父母上周去了四川的峨眉山旅行，峨眉山動植物資源豐富，氣候宜人．爬山過程中作者和家人拍照片，喂猴子，拜訪寺廟，玩得很高興．很快天就黑了，他們在山上的一個賓館住下了，食物很貴但服務(wù)很好．累了一天，作者一上床就睡著了．

解答 Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan．Likeeveryone
                                                                                                                     As
knows，it's∧famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals．The weather was fine．It
                  a       
was about noon∧we arrived at the foot of the mountain．The three of them were very excited．
                     when                                                                            us
As we climbed the mountain，we fed monkeys，visiting temples and told stories．On the way
                                                                       visited
down I was busy taking pictures since the scenery was so beautiful．The time passesquickly．
 up                                                                                                            passed                                    
Evening came．We spent the night in a hotel inthe top of the mountain．The food was expensive
                                                                  at
and the service was good．I was so tired that I fell asleepat the moment my head touched the pillow．
but                                                                           去掉at
1．Like改為As；考查固定搭配，as every knows是固定短語，意為"眾所周知"，like是介詞，后面接名詞或名詞性短語，故此處Like改為As．
2．famous前面加a；考查冠詞，mountain是可數(shù)名詞，前面加不定冠詞a泛指"一個"．
3．noon后面加when；考查時間副詞，這里句子It was about noon和we arrived at the foot of the mountain分別是一個完整獨立的句子，中間缺少一個連接詞，noon指時間，故用when引導(dǎo)從句．
4．them改為us；考查人稱代詞，文中提到我和父母，強調(diào)"我們?nèi)��?，而非"他們"，故them改為us．
5．visiting改為visited；考查并列結(jié)構(gòu)，句中動詞visit 和fed，told是并列謂語，所以時態(tài)要保持一致用一般過去時．
6．down改為up；考查句意，結(jié)合上下文分析，句意應(yīng)為"因為風(fēng)景很美，在上山的路上我忙著拍照"，所以
down改為up．
7．passes改為passed；考查動詞的時態(tài)，本文講的是上周的事情，故用一般過去時．
8．in改為at；考查介詞，"在山頂"用"at the top of the mountain"，這是固定用法．
9．a(chǎn)nd改為but；考查連詞，結(jié)合語境分析，句意應(yīng)為"食物很貴但服務(wù)很好"，所以用but表示轉(zhuǎn)折．
10．去掉at；考查固定句型，the moment后面跟句子，意為"一…就…"，所以把介詞at去掉．

點評 整體理解短文，充分運用所學(xué)的基礎(chǔ)知識，包括一些實詞和虛詞的用法，固定短語搭配，習(xí)慣性用法，結(jié)合上下文整體關(guān)系，找出錯誤并加以修正．