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短文改錯(cuò)

The other day I happen to read an eighty-word passage about details. I found it prettily good.

One who wants to achieve great success should pay attentions to details. Sometimes it is the details in that determine our success, for it has a great impact on what we’re doing. We should form the habit of being careful, so a careful person rarely overlooks details. What’s more, we should learn to keep balance of quantity and quality. When facing with lots of work, the faster we do them, the more mistakes we usually make. In that case we are possible to neglect the details. So we should remember that quality comes first, without that quantity is of no importance.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 happen -happened

 prettily-pretty

 attentions- attention

 details in去掉in

 so-because

 keep∧ balance 之間加the

 facing- faced或把with去掉

 them- it

 possible- likely

 that- which

【解析】

試題分析： 文章有The other day 前幾天，表示的過去的時(shí)間，故happen -happened

 我發(fā)現(xiàn)它特別的好，pretty 可以作為副詞，修飾形容詞，故prettily-pretty

 一個(gè)想要實(shí)現(xiàn)偉大成功的人必須注意細(xì)節(jié)，pay attention to注意，固定短語(yǔ)，故attentions- attention

 有時(shí)候就是細(xì)節(jié)決定我們的成功，it is …that,強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，故details in去掉in

 我們應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成仔細(xì)的習(xí)慣，因?yàn)橐粋�(gè)仔細(xì)的人不會(huì)忽視細(xì)節(jié)，故so-because

 我們應(yīng)該保持質(zhì)與量的平衡，the balance of固定結(jié)構(gòu)，故keep∧ balance 之間加the

 當(dāng)我們面對(duì)許多工作的時(shí)候，be faced with sth或是face sth，when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句省略了主語(yǔ)和be動(dòng)詞，故facing- faced或把with去掉

 我們做的越快，我們犯的錯(cuò)誤就越多，it指代work ，故them- it

 在這種情況下我們很有可能忽視細(xì)節(jié)，sb be likely to do sth某人很有可能做某事，故possible- likely

 我們應(yīng)該記住質(zhì)量第一，沒有質(zhì)量，再多的數(shù)量也是無(wú)用的，which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，放在介詞之后，that不可以引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，故that- which

考點(diǎn)：考查學(xué)生對(duì)詞匯語(yǔ)法掌握情況。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題考查連詞，及物動(dòng)詞，名詞單復(fù)數(shù),時(shí)態(tài)，固定短語(yǔ)句型等，平時(shí)注重多積累，答題時(shí)結(jié)合句意和語(yǔ)法進(jìn)行分析，答完后通讀，是否通順，符合邏輯。