Question

下面這幅漫畫展現了人生的一個道理，請根據你對這幅漫畫的理解用英語寫一篇短文．

你的短文應包含以下內容：
1.描述圖片內容，如圖中人物的行為和心情等：
2.揭示圖畫所要表達的人生哲理；
3.結合自身實際，談談這一漫畫給你的啟示。
注意：
1.詞數150左右。開頭已經寫好，不計入總詞數．
2.作文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。
3.參考詞匯：挖土cut earth 鉆石 diamond
Many people fail in life because they do not realize how close they are to success when they give up. In this picture, we can see ____________________________________

Answer 1

Never Give up
Many people fail in life because they do not realize how close they are to success when they give up. In this picture, we can see a man is cutting earth in a tunnel, hoping to find some diamonds. He makes great efforts in his work. However, after a long time of pains without gains, he decides to give up, feeling disappointed and depressed. But in fact he is very close to success when he gives up. With one or two more attempts of cutting, he would have seen those diamonds right in front of him.
This story tells us a very simple but important piece of truth: we should be confident in what we have chosen to do and never stop our effort until we succeed.
As a student preparing for the entrance examinations, I should learn a lesson from the man. Just like the diamonds in the picture, success is just waiting for my last efforts. I have been cutting earth for so many years, so I will never give up before I succeed.

試題分析：本文是一篇看圖寫話。體裁屬于議論類�？磮D寫話是能力要求較高的書面表達。它能較好的測試學生的能力水平�？磮D本身就是一種能力。英語就成了表達能力的工具。議論類看圖寫話應注意：1.對圖畫進行簡單的描述；2.闡述文章所蘊含的哲理；3.發(fā)表自己的看法和態(tài)度。成文時：時態(tài)：一般現在時；人稱：第三人稱為主，發(fā)表看法的時候，用第一人稱。使用高級詞匯、句型和短語。適當使用連詞和插入語使文章自然，流暢。
【亮點說明】使用了高級句型從句：Many people fail in life because they do not realize how close they are to success when they give up； in fact he is very close to success when he gives up； we should be confident in what we have chosen to do and never stop our effort until we succeed.；I have been cutting earth for so many years, so I will never give up before I succeed.
使用了分詞短語：hoping to find some diamonds.；feeling disappointed and depressed.；With one or two more attempts of cutting,
使用了短語：give up；fail in；makes great efforts in；