Question

2．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
假如你是啟明中學(xué)（Ming Qi Middle School）的李明，想申請一個(gè)扶貧項(xiàng)目，幫助貧困地區(qū)的兒童．根據(jù)以下啟事，寫一封申請信（信中不能提到真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校）．

啟事 國際兒童基金會(huì)將資助中學(xué)生開展扶貧項(xiàng)目，以幫助貧困地區(qū)的兒童．申請成功者將獲得項(xiàng)目經(jīng)費(fèi)2000元． 有意者請來信告知： 1）你個(gè)人的基本情況； 2）你對申請項(xiàng)目的基本設(shè)想； 3）項(xiàng)目經(jīng)費(fèi)的使用計(jì)劃． 聯(lián)系方式：2011hope@icf．org                                   2011

Answer 1

分析 本文為應(yīng)用文，又是圖畫類作文．根據(jù)對一則啟事圖片的理解寫一封申請信，申請一個(gè)扶貧項(xiàng)目，幫助貧困地區(qū)的兒童．寫作要點(diǎn)：說明寫信目的；個(gè)人的基本情況；對申請項(xiàng)目的基本設(shè)想；項(xiàng)目經(jīng)費(fèi)的使用計(jì)劃．基本時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第一、三人稱為主．重要短語：on behalf of （代表…．），apply for（申請…..），be aimed at （目的是），worry about．（擔(dān)心），go about（著手做），spend money doing（做某事花費(fèi)錢），be worth doing…．（值得做），inform sb to do…..（通知某人做某事），dole out （失業(yè)救濟(jì)），obliged （必須的，感激的），oblivion （遺忘）．

解答 Dear World Child Foundation organizers：
 My name is Jerry Lu，a student currently studying at Ming Qi Middle School．I am writing，on behalf of my classmates，to apply for the 2000 yuan's worth of fund in a bid to initiate a program aimed at helping those students who are financially disadvantaged．【高分句型】（說明寫信目的）
 Being raised in families that don't have to worry about putting food on the table need not mean oblivion to our less fortunate peers．【高分句型】On this account，we would appreciate it if you could sponsor our poverty-relief endeavor．（個(gè)人的基本情況）The following is how we would go about using the money．
We would  spend 1500 yuan purchasing some stationery for the needy students in a poverty-stricken area．It is worth noting that we would inform them to pick up the school supplies themselves instead of us"doling out"the supplies so that we wouldn't end up embarrassing those who we want to help．【高分句型】The remainder of the fund would be used to invite a motivational speaker who was to talk about how to lift oneself out of poverty by making right academic and professional decisions．【高分句型】（對申請項(xiàng)目的基本設(shè)想、項(xiàng)目經(jīng)費(fèi)的使用計(jì)劃）
 At the end of the day，our efforts might only trigger a ripple in the lives of some young people，but who knows what butterfly effects these young minds may have on tomorrow's world？（觀點(diǎn)）
We would be much obliged if you could reply at your earliest convenience．
You can reach me at 2011hope@icf．org．
  Yours Sincerely，
 Li Ming

點(diǎn)評 應(yīng)用文要注意一定的格式．圖表作文要求將畫面所包含的有效信息用文字表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象．如果是記敘文類的素材，要注意故事的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件的起因、過程、結(jié)果這六個(gè)要素；如果是說明文或議論文，首先要對圖畫的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述，然后圍繞圖畫的信息進(jìn)行說明或議論．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．