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下面是網(wǎng)友Abe的一條微博內(nèi)容：It seems that none of my classmates want to be my friends because I'm fat．I feel very lonely in class．I suppose I'll break down(崩潰)someday．假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)留言開(kāi)導(dǎo)他，并適當(dāng)給出一些建議。

注意：

1．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

2．作文開(kāi)頭已給，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。詞數(shù)100左右。

Dear Abe,

　　Sorry to know that you’re so upset about your overweight．I quite understand what you’re feeling now．

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Dear Abe,

　　Sorry to see that you’re so upset about your overweight．I quite understand what you’re feeling now．Friendship is of great importance to us teenagers, especially when in school．

　　But I don't quite agree that your classmates don't make friends with you simply because you’re fat．I think that it may be your character rather than your figure that has caused the problem．You shouldn't just live in your own world．Instead, try to cheer up a bit and find more chances to join your classmates．For example, play ball games with them as often as you can, which will help you lose weight as well．

I'm sure you will make some friends and become happier soon．

Yours,

Li Hua


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