Question

【題目】假定你是高中學(xué)李華，你的美國朋友Jim即將升入高中，對高中學(xué)習(xí)感到憂慮，想讓你給他一些學(xué)習(xí)建議。請你給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1).與老師交流，征求老師意見；
2).上課積極參與討論，專心聽講，做好筆記；
3).課后積極完成作業(yè)，鞏固知識。
4)…….
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Tim,
I am glad to hear that you will be a senior student…
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I'm delighted to hear that you'll be a senior student. Now, I'd like to share my study tips with you.

First, you'd better communicate with your teachers regularly. In this way they may offer some great advice on both your study and life. Second why not involve yourself in each class actively, listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later? Third, its a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school, which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.

I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life.

Best wishes!

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】本題是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李華的身份向美國朋友Jim寫一封電子郵件，寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱類作文，內(nèi)容包括：1).與老師交流，征求老師意見；2).上課積極參與討論，專心聽講，做好筆記；3).課后積極完成作業(yè)，鞏固知識。寫作時可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。