Question

【題目】假設你是紅星中學高三的學生李華。你班交換生Jim將要參加“學在中國”留學生漢語演講比 賽，來信向你咨詢。請你給他寫一封郵件，內容包括：

1. 推薦一個演講話題；

2. 說明推薦的理由；

3. 建議他做哪些準備工作。

注意：1.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

2.詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結尾已寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)）。

Dear Jim,

I'm glad to know that you'll take part in the “Studying in China” speech contest.

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I really hope my advice will be helpful. Wish you a great success.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I'm glad to know that you'll take part in the “ Studying in China” speech contest. I'd like to give you some suggestions.

I recommend that you talk about the courses on Chinese traditional culture you've attended The major reason is that they introduce the real treasure in human history, Besides, since you've taken the courses systematically, you're sure to have a deep understanding of them.

To do it well, I think you should choose impressive examples to gain the recognition of the judges, Moreover, you have to practice your spoken Chinese to express yourself more clearly and fluently. Speaking skills are also needed, for they can help maximize the effectiveness of your speech.

I really hope my advice will be helpful. Wish you a great success.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇應用文，要求寫一封信。

第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個方面的信息。第一，1. 推薦一個演講話題；2. 說明推薦的理由；3. 建議他做哪些準備工作。第二，人稱為第一人稱和第二人稱。第三，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為三段。第一段，獲知交換生Jim將要參加“學在中國”留學生漢語演講比賽，對此提出一些建議。第二段，推薦一個演講話題，說明推薦的理由；第三段，建議他做哪些準備工作。第四段，表達希望。

第三步：確定關鍵詞匯和短語: "Studying in China" speech contest, suggestions， recommend ,Chinese traditional culture，introduce the real treasure ，have a deep understanding of, impressive examples, gain the recognition of the judges, clearly and fluently, maximize the effectiveness of your speech。

第四步：確定較為高級的句:that引導的賓語從句和虛擬語氣I recommend that you talk about the courses on Chinese traditional culture you've attended. that引導的表語從句The major reason is that they introduce the real treasure in human history。since 引導的原因狀語從句since you've taken the courses systematically, you're sure to have a deep understanding of them。

第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞進行過渡銜接:Besides, Moreover。

第六步：注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。