Question

12．假如你是班長(zhǎng)李華．到了高三，很多同學(xué)為了加班加點(diǎn)，熬夜現(xiàn)象較為嚴(yán)重，班主任注意到了這一
現(xiàn)象，開班會(huì)讓大家討論熬夜學(xué)習(xí)的利弊．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下大家討論的結(jié)果，給某英語報(bào)社寫信投稿，
并談?wù)勀阕约旱目捶ǎ?br />

贊成者	反對(duì)者	自己的看法
效果更好．	應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)平衡分配時(shí)間．	…
充分利用時(shí)間．	熬夜對(duì)白天聽課效果不利．
同學(xué)都在加班加點(diǎn)，自己心慌，怕落后．	…

注意：1．詞數(shù) 120 左右．文章開頭已給出，不算字?jǐn)?shù)．
2．可適當(dāng)有效拓展以使行文連貫．
Dear editor，
With the College Entrance Examinations approaching，Dear editor，
With the College Entrance Examinationsapproaching，the students of Senior Three arefocusing much more on studying．Many of them even begin to stay up studying．A heateddiscussionwas held to argue about the advantages and disadvantages of it．
Somestudents have their own reasons for studying late into night．Firstly，thequietness in thenightwill result in better effectiveness．Besides，the examinations are only 200 days away so it'shigh time they made good use ofevery minute．What's more，seeing others studying so hard，theywillfeel anxious if they don't takeaction．

Some others，however，hold the opposite view，saying that a sensible senior student must know how to balance his time between study and leisure．As everyone knows，staying up late will naturally affect thenext day's performance in class．As far as I'm concerned，different people have different habits．If you can hold it，it's yourown business when to study andwhen to sleep．．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"表格+提綱類"形式，根據(jù)文章所給提示信息寫一封信，就班級(jí)中展開的關(guān)于"熬夜學(xué)習(xí)之利弊"談一談自己的看法．既是提綱作文又是圖表類作文．時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主．人稱以第三人稱為主．重要短語：focus on…（集中在…上），stay up  （熬夜），argue about（關(guān)于…爭(zhēng)辯），result in （導(dǎo)致），make good use of （充分利用），take action（采取措施，采取行動(dòng)），balance one's  time  （平衡某人的時(shí)間），as far as I'm concerned （就某人所關(guān)注的而言）．
【高分句型】
1．the examinations are only 200 days away so it's high time they made good use of every minute．
這里是虛擬語氣．句型為"It is high time that+句子（謂語動(dòng)詞用過去式或shuould+動(dòng)詞）"，表示"該是做某事的時(shí)候了"．
2．Some others，however，hold the opposite view，saying that a sensible senior student must know how to balance his time between study and leisure．
這里是由現(xiàn)在分詞saying引導(dǎo)的賓語從句作伴隨狀語，主句的主語是some others 和動(dòng)詞say構(gòu)成邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系．saying之后為that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，從句中a sensible senior student為主語，謂語為must know，動(dòng)詞know之后為疑問詞how+to do構(gòu)成的賓語．

解答 Deareditor，
      With the College Entrance Examinationsapproaching，the students of Senior Three are focusing much more on studying．Many of them even begin to stay up studying．A heated discussionwas held to argue about the advantages and disadvantages of it．（開頭---引出話題）
        Somestudents have their own reasons for studying late into night．Firstly，thequietness in the nightwill result in better effectiveness．Besides，the examinations are only 200 days away so it's high time they made good use ofevery minute．【高分句型】
What's more，seeing others studying so hard，they willfeel anxious if they don't takeaction．   （贊成者觀點(diǎn)） 
     Some others，however，hold the oppositeview，saying that a sensible senior student must know how to balance his timebetween study and leisure．【高分句型】As everyone knows，staying up late will naturallyaffect the next day's performance in class．（反對(duì)者觀點(diǎn)）
As far as I'm concerned，different people have different habits．If you can hold it，it's your own business when to study andwhen to sleep．（自己看法）
 Yours  
 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫好這類圖表及提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，發(fā)揮想象，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．