假設(shè)你是李越，發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生中存在不愿意參加體育活動(dòng)(physical exercise)的現(xiàn)象。他們認(rèn)為進(jìn)行體育活動(dòng)會(huì)浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，影響學(xué)習(xí)。但你有不同想法。請(qǐng)就此話題給校報(bào)老師寫一封信，向大家宣傳體育鍛煉的好處。字?jǐn)?shù)：120詞

短文中應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：1. 指出他們觀點(diǎn)的不對(duì)之處；2. 告知體育鍛煉的好處；3.提出建議

Dear Editor Teacher，

Dear Editor Teacher,

I’m writing to reflect a problem. Some students do not like to join in physical exercise. They think it is a waste of time and influences their study. However, physical exercise is a necessary part of school life. It is very unwise for students to do so.

We can benefit a lot from physical exercise. Doing sports can help us build up a strong body. It is also a good way for us to reduce pressure and keep a pleasant mood. Besides, when taking exercise, we can communicate with others and improve our social skills.

All kinds of ball games are good choices for us. We can manage our time properly and balance work and play. Weekend is also a good time for sports. Do not hesitate to take exercise.

【解析】

試題分析：主要要圍繞體育活動(dòng)有什么好處，為什么要進(jìn)行體育活動(dòng)來(lái)展開文章。對(duì)于談看法的文章，注意條理要清晰，注意使用題目提供的相關(guān)信息。注意行文的連貫性。時(shí)態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)上：可采取總分模式。使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯提升作文檔次。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】首先，文章采用了it is unwise for sb to do sth 的句式，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)豐滿。Doing sports can help us build up a strong body.采用動(dòng)名詞詞組做主語(yǔ)，既新穎獨(dú)特又表明觀點(diǎn)，使文章更有水平。When taking exercise ,從句的使用使得條理更加分明。其次，however ,reflect ,unwise 等詞語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用使文章更加生動(dòng)。詞組benefit ….from通過(guò)…受益，be good choice for sb 對(duì)…是好選擇，hesitate to do sth 猶豫，不情愿做某事等的運(yùn)用，使文章亮點(diǎn)多，水平提升。文章結(jié)構(gòu)上，首先開題提出觀點(diǎn)，個(gè)性鮮明。其次分點(diǎn)敘述，條理分明；其后總結(jié)，行文流暢，有條不紊。

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