Question

假設你是校學生會主席王林，你校要組織全體學生參觀中國科學技術館（China Science and Technology Museum）,你要在廣播中宣布此事，請根據以下要點寫一篇廣播通知：
參觀時間：本周六；
參觀安排：8：00在學校大門口集合；8:10統(tǒng)一乘校車前往；8:40在導游帶領下開始參觀；11:30參觀結束，統(tǒng)一乘車返回；
注意事項：不要遲到；遵守展覽館的規(guī)章制度。
注意：
可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
字數100詞左右。
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Answer 1

May I have your attention .please? I have an important announcement to make. We are going to pay a visit to China Science and Technn'ogy Museum this Saturday. Make sure you arrive at the school gate before 8:00 a.m, we will set off at 8:10 a.m. by school bus together. At 8:40 a.m. we will begin our visit with a guide leading us. While visiting the museum, please obey the rules and regulations there. At about 11:30 a.m. our visit will come to an end. After that, we'll return by bus. I'm sure we will have a wonderful time there.
Don't be late, please. That's all. Thank you.

試題分析：本文是一篇口頭通知。寫通知是高考常見的一種體裁。符合學生的生活實際。成文時應該注意以下幾點：1.注意通知的基本格式；2.通知的內容要齊全；參觀時間：本周六；參觀安排：8：00在學校大門口集合；8:10統(tǒng)一乘校車前往；8:40在導游帶領下開始參觀；11:30參觀結束，統(tǒng)一乘車返回；注意事項：不要遲到；遵守展覽館的規(guī)章制度。3.人稱：第一人稱為主；4.時態(tài)：一般現在時或將來時；5.使用一些高級詞匯、短語和句型，以提高文章的檔次；6.恰當使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章表達自然、流暢。
【亮點說明】使用了非謂語動詞短語：While visiting the museum, please obey the rules and regulations there. we will begin our visit with a guide leading us.使用了短語：pay a visit to，Make sure，set off，come to an end，have a wonderful time