Question

9．假如你是高一學(xué)生李華，你的美國筆友 Mike 本學(xué)期來華當(dāng)交流生（exchange student），他感覺與同學(xué)用漢語交流很費勁．請你根據(jù)以下要點給他寫一封建議信，幫助他快速提高漢語水平，同時，你也希望得到 Mike 給你英語學(xué)習(xí)的建議．
要點如下：
1．你的建議．
2．希望得到 Mike 學(xué)習(xí)英語的建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Mike，
                                                        
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Besides，I consider it effective to keep a diary in Chinese every day so that you can enlarge your vocabulary and get familiar with grammar
高分句型二：
To be honest，I am also faced with some difficulties in learning English．
句型一  so that you can enlarge your vocabulary and get familiar with grammar 該句是一個由so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句
句型二 I am also faced with some difficulties in learning English．該句的謂語部分使用了一個固定短語搭配：be faced with面對，面臨  
此外，該文章還使用了以下高級詞匯和重要短語：to be honest   老實說   have difficulty in doing sth做某事有困難

解答 Dear Mike，
   Learning that you had difficulty in communicating in Chinese as an exchange student，I'm writing to offer you some advice．（表明寫作意圖）
First，it would be better if you can follow some famous TV programs like News Report in CCTV 1 to correct your pronunciation．Besides，I consider it effective to keep a diary in Chinese every day so that you can enlarge your vocabulary and get familiar with grammar．（高分句型一）Most importantly，seize every opportunity to practice it，such as talking with native Chinese speakers，holding debates and singing Chinese songs？After all，practice makes perfect．
   To be honest，I am also faced with some difficulties in learning English．（高分句型二）Would you mind giving me some tips on it？（提出希望）That would be appreciated．Best wishes!
   Yours，
   Li Hua

點評 該書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點．考生在平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．