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4．2014年全國發(fā)生數(shù)起嚴重的校園暴力事件，某中學高三8班圍繞校園安全問題召開主題班會．假定你是班長李華，以"How to protect ourselves in campus violence"為標題寫一篇發(fā)言稿，主要包括如下內容：
1．校園暴力事件已引起廣泛關注．
2．要求每個學生都學習相關知識，增強自身防范能力．
3．遇到校園暴力時要采取適當措施，包括：保持冷靜，判斷清楚自己的處境和可能的危險；盡一切可能避免人身傷害；及時報警．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；開頭和結尾已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)．
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：增強-enhance
How to protect ourselves in campus violence
Dear friends，
This year，some seriously violent incidents happened in campus，resulting in very bad results．The incidents of campus violence have drawn wide spread attention in our country．
As a student，we should learn some knowledge about how to deal with the violence and enhance the ability of self-protection．

Of course，if we meet the violence，we should take appropriate measures to protect ourselves．At first，we'd better keep calm，judge the situation and beaware of the possible dangers．Then，we should try our best to escape or prevent the violence．At last but not least，we should call the police or teachers as soon as possible to avoid the physical injury．
That's all．Thank you．
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文，根據(jù)所提供的材料，寫一篇發(fā)言稿．以"How to protect ourselves in campus violence"為標題．寫作要點包括：1．校園暴力事件已引起廣泛關注；2．要求每個學生都學習相關知識，增強自身防范能力；3．遇到校園暴力時要采取適當措施，包括：保持冷靜，判斷清楚自己的處境和可能的危險； 盡一切可能避免人身傷害；及時報警．寫作時應以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主．重要短語：result in（導致），draw wide spread attention （引起廣泛關注），deal with（處理），enhance the ability of…（增強…的能力），take appropriate measures to（采取適當?shù)拇胧�），keep calm （保持冷靜），try our best to do sth（努力做某事），be aware of（意識到）．

解答 How to protect ourselves in campus violence 
Dear friends，
This year，some seriously violent incidents happened in campus，resulting in very badresults．【高分句型】The incidents of campus violence have drawn widespreadattention in our country．（校園暴力已引起廣泛關注）
As a student，we should learn some knowledge about how to deal with the violence and enhancethe ability of self-protection．【高分句型】（要求每個學生都學習相關知識，增強自身防范能力）
Of course，if we meet the violence，we should take appropriate measures to protect ourselves．At first，we'd better keep calm，judge the situation and beaware of the possible dangers．Then，we should try our best to escape or prevent the violence．At last but not least，we should call the police orteachers as soon as possible to avoid the physical injury．（遇到校園暴力應采取適當措施）
   That's all．Thank you．

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點，并適當增加細節(jié)．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．