Question

如今, 中國的許多城市出現(xiàn)了跳廣場舞的熱潮, 對于這個現(xiàn)象, 人們褒貶不一。請根據(jù)以下提示, 用英語給報社寫一篇報道。

大部分人贊成, 認(rèn)為是一種健康的活動,省錢；
一些人反對, 認(rèn)為影響他人的休息, 有噪音污染；
你的看法。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右;
2. 文章開頭已給出, 不計入總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

Nowadays square dancing is getting more and more popular with Chinese people in many cities. Some public places are usually crowded with happy dancers, especially in the morning and evening. But now people have thrown doubt on this issue.
To be honest, most people say yes to square dancing, considering it a green form of exercising to keep fit. Besides, it is money-saving. But meanwhile, some others are greatly opposed to square dancing. They argue that the happiness of those dancers is built on the pain of others who have to suffer from the loud music and noise. With their peace of life disturbed, they are angry with and even run into conflict with the dancers.
In my view, square dancing is certainly beneficial to the whole society so long as the dancers show concern for others’ needs. What’s more, our government should invest more money to build some specified recreation centers for people.

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的。考生在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時態(tài)，要求是敘述廣場舞來反映主題，所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時。但本文必須用第三人稱。再有就是應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如throw doubt on，be opposed to等和with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)等。還運用了that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句，現(xiàn)在分詞considering的應(yīng)用，so long as引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句等。并注意了句子的銜接，如：to be honest，besides，What’s more等等。