Question

閱讀下面短文, 按任務寫作的要求以約30個詞概括文章的主要內容。
Teenagers’ secrets should be kept to themselves and no one else, their parents included, has the right to stick their nose into their private life.
As we know, teenagers are going through a special period of development both physically and psychologically(心理上). They are curious about and puzzled by the unexpected changes in their body and mind. What’s more, exposed to a world of adults, it is only too natural for them to begin following the example of adults’ behaviors in secret. Boys begin to smoke and girls begin to spend time doing their hair and care more about what to wear. Some even begin to date with a girlfriend or boyfriend without letting their parents know. They are doing all this in secret because they are still unsure whether it is right to do so and afraid that, if found out by their parent, they will get misunderstood and even punished. In fact, in many cases, parents can not deal with such matters well but hurt their children’s feelings badly, making children unwilling to communicate with them any more. When this happens, it terribly hurts feelings of the family as well.
Therefore, it sounds reasonable and acceptable that teenagers should keep their secrets to themselves instead of sharing them with their parents, who should give them the freedom in dealing with secrets.

Answer 1

Many teenagers have their own secrets, but their parents always can’t deal with them well, which will probably hurt feelings of children and their family. Actually, teenagers should have their own secrets rather than share them with their parents. (40w)

試題分析：本文屬于讀寫任務寫作的一部分，動筆前，一定要認真閱讀原文，并理解內容。認真看清題目要求，這篇書面表達給了一段材料：先要求以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。寫作時盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，不能用文章的原句。
【亮點說明】文章簡潔的總結了所給材料，語言規(guī)范，內容合適，使用了詞組：deal with 處理，rather than而不是， share sb. with和…分享。Many teenagers have their own secrets, but their parents always can’t deal with them well, which will probably hurt feelings of children and their family.這句話使用了定語從句。
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