Question

15．你喜歡快餐食品嗎？快餐食品在青少年和兒童中很流行．請根據(jù)提示寫一篇120 詞左右的發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：
快餐流行的原因（至少2點(diǎn)）
弊端（至少2點(diǎn)）
個(gè)人看法
開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Fast food
Dear friends，
Nowadays，fast food is becoming more and more popular among children and
 
Teenagers．

Answer 1

分析 本文是應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫一篇發(fā)言稿，闡述關(guān)于快餐食品的問題．寫作要點(diǎn)：1．快餐流行的原因；2．弊端；3．個(gè)人看法．屬提綱作文．在寫作時(shí)人稱以第三人稱為主．時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．重要短語：…reason for sth （…的原因），in no time（立即…），take sth away（帶走某物），cost sb much money （花費(fèi)某人很多錢），as little as possible（盡可能少地），in a hurry （快點(diǎn)）．

解答 Fast food
Dear friends，
Nowadays，fast food is becoming more and more popular among children and teenagers．I think there are several reasons for its popularity．
First，it's very convenient and can save a lot of time．You can go into a fast restaurant to order your food and it is ready in no time．Besides，you can take it away or eat there．What's more，it offers excellent service and tasty food．（快餐流行的原因）
However，fast food is not good for people's health，especially children．There is too much fat in the food and you can't get enough fresh vegetables．Also the food is very expensive，which may cost you much money．【高分句型】（弊端）
We are what we eat．Therefore，it's very important for us to form healthy eating habits and eat fast food as little as possible．【高分句型】It's only a choice when you are really in a hurry．（個(gè)人看法）
That's all．Thank you!

點(diǎn)評 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．