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19．假如你是高三學生李華，現(xiàn)在某國外教育雜志向你約稿，請你以Confucius and Analects of Confucius（《孔子和論語》）為題寫一篇文章，向西方讀者介紹孔子和《論語》，要點包括：
1．孔子，生于春秋戰(zhàn)國時期的魯國，著名的大思想家、大教育家，他的思想至今在中國有著深遠的影響；
2．《論語》由孔子弟子編寫而成．主要記錄孔子及其弟子的言行，反映了孔子的思想，是儒家學派（Confucian School）的經(jīng)典著作之一．全書共20篇、492章；
3．介紹你最喜歡的一則論語并說明內(nèi)涵和原因（例如：三人行必有我?guī)煟��?br />注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 這是提綱類作文．根據(jù)要求可知要采用第一人稱，用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容分成三部分：一 孔子本人的介紹；二 介紹《論語》；三 介紹自己最喜歡的一句話．
高分句型：
1．Consisting of 492 chapters from 20 books（非謂語動詞在狀語），"Analects of Confucius"（主語）is written （謂語）by his students，showing us（結(jié)果狀語） what （引導賓語從句）Confucius and his students said and did
由20本書492章，《論語》由孔子的弟子所寫，記錄孔子和他的弟子的言行．
2．One of my favorite pieces from Analects of Confucius （主語）is that（引導表語從句） as three men are working together，one of them is bound to be good enough to act as my teacher，which （引導定語從句，which代指as three men are working together，one of them is bound to be good enough to act as my teacher）means we should learn and benefit from each other so as to make more progress
《論語》中我最喜歡的一句話是：三人行必有我?guī)煟�它表明為了進步我們要向周圍的人學習．

解答 Confucius，born in Lu State in Spring and Autumn Period，is both a great thinker and an educator，whose ideas have been influencing China deeply and profoundly（孔子本人的介紹）．
Consisting of 492 chapters from 20 books，"Analects of Confucius"is written by his students，showing us what Confucius and his students said and did（高分句型一）．It is one of the most classical masterpieces of Confucian School because it contains a lot of ideas of Confucius'（介紹《論語》）．
One of my favorite pieces from Analects of Confucius is that as three men are working together，one of them is bound to be good enough to act as my teacher，which means we should learn and benefit from each other so as to make more progress（高分句型二）（自己最喜歡的一句話）．

點評 本文采用了一些較為高級的句式，幾乎包含了高中階段所有的語法項目，例如非謂語動詞；定語從句等等，但是我們在寫作時，還是要考慮自己的水平，如果對于高級的句式不能正確的運用，那么不如不用．否則得不償失