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15．為減少城市溫室氣體排放量，樂清市政府決定推出"便民自行車"，為市民提供免費的自行車租賃服務(wù)．這項決定得到了大多數(shù)市民的擁護(hù)，但也有一部分人持反對意見．假設(shè)你是一名高二學(xué)生李越，請給市長寫封信談?wù)勀銓Υ隧棝Q議的看法．信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下兩點：
1．決議內(nèi)容和市民反應(yīng)，
2．你對此項決議的看法．
信的開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，但不計入總字?jǐn)?shù)．
注意：1．字?jǐn)?shù)100-120.2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名，班級和學(xué)校名稱．
Dear Mayor，
I am Li Yue，a seniorⅡstudent．Recently I've read in the newspaper that our government will provide citizens with free bicycles to travel around．The majority of citizens are delighted to hear his discussion，while there are still some different voices，worrying that it will merely be a waste of money．
There is no doubt that this decision will encourage more citizens to ride bicycles．Consequently，it contributes to reducing thge traffic pressure in our city as well as the emission or the greenhouse gases，thus in a way slowing the process of global warming．For us citizens，not only is riding bicycle an economic way to transport but it offers us a good chance to exerciseThank you for reading my letter．I am sure all citizens are looking forward to a more convenient life and a greener world．
Yours faithfully，

Li Yue．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們給市長寫封信談?wù)剬?便民自行車"此項決議的看法，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，內(nèi)容要點包括：決議內(nèi)容和市民反應(yīng)，你對此項決議的看法．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為決議內(nèi)容和市民反應(yīng)．第二部分為對此項決議的看法．
重點短語與句型：
provide sb with sth 提供某人某物
the majority of 大多數(shù)
contribute to 促成，是…原因
高分句型一：Recently I've read in the newspaper that our government will provide citizens with free bicycles to travel around此句用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句
高分句型二：For us citizens，not only is riding bicycle an economic way to transport but it offers us a good chance to exercise．此句 not only…but also 前面部分倒裝，后面不倒裝

解答 Dear Mayor，
I am Li Yue，a seniorⅡstudent．Recently I've read in the newspaper that our government will provide citizens with free bicycles to travel around（高分句型一）．The majority of citizens are delighted to hear his discussion，while there are still some different voices，worrying that it will merely be a waste of money．（決議內(nèi)容和市民反應(yīng)）
There is no doubt that this decision will encourage more citizens to ride bicycles．Consequently，it contributes to reducing thge traffic pressure in our city as well as the emission or the greenhouse gases，thus in a way slowing the process of global warming．For us citizens，not only is riding bicycle an economic way to transport but it offers us a good chance to exercise．（高分句型二）Thank you for reading my letter．I am sure all citizens are looking forward to a more convenient life and a greener world．（對此項決議的看法）
Yours faithfully，
Li Yue．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．