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　　縮寫下面短文，主要意思不得變更，語法和拼寫正確，語言符合英語習(xí)慣。詞數(shù)：120～150。

Good Manners

　　Manner are important to happy relations among people. Everyone likes a person with good manners. No one likes a person with bad manners. But what are good manners? How does one know what to do and what not to do?

Well, here are some examples.

　　A person with good manner never laughs at people when they are in trouble. Instead, he tries to help them. He is always kind to others. When people are waiting for a bus, he takes his turn. He does not push to the front of the line. On the bus he gives his seat to an older person or a person with a very young child. If he knocks into someone, or gets in his way, he says “Excuse me” or “I'm sorry”.

　　He says “Please” when he asks for something and “Thank you” when he receives something. He stands up when he is speaking to an older person, and he does not sit down until the other person takes his seat. He does not interrupt other people when they are talking. He does not talk too much. He does not talk loudly or laugh loudly in public. When he is eating he does not speak with his mouth full of food. He uses a handkerchief when he sneezes or coughs. He does not spit in public.

　　As a student, it is bad manners to come late for class. If you are late you should make an apology to the teacher either at the time or after class. It is also bad manners to keep silent when the teacher asks you a question. If you do not know the answer, say so immediately. If you do know, answer in a loud enough voice so that all the class may hear. It is polite for the students to help the teacher. Sometimes students can help their teachers to clean the blackboard, to close or open the door and windows. Sometimes there are papers to collect or to hand out. This kind of help is always appreciated.

　　Ideas of what are good manners are not always the same in different countries. But in all countries it is important to be kind and helpful.

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Good Manners 　　Manners are important to good relations among people. No one likes a person with bad manners. A person with good manners never laughs at people when they are in trouble. Instead, he tries to help them. When he asks for something, he says “Please”. And when he receives something, he usually says “Thank you” . He does not interrupt other people when they are talking. He does not talk loudly or laugh loudly in public. When he sneezes or spits, he uses a handkerchief. As a student, It is bad manners to be late for class. If you are late you should make an apology to the teacher either at the time or after class. 　　Though people have different ideas of what are good manners, in all countries it is important to be kind and helpful. 　　解析：①本篇為“說明文”，所以縮寫時要把原文要想說明的問題講清楚。如：禮貌的重要性，什么是有禮貌，什么是沒禮貌等。至于文中所舉的例子，不需要在縮寫中一一例舉。 　　②原文較長，需刪減的地方較多�？s寫時，要注意意思的連貫和語氣的通順，不要使人產(chǎn)生只是把原文中的一些句子拼湊起來的感覺。 　�、劭s寫時應(yīng)保留原文的標(biāo)題。