Question

假如你是中學(xué)生李華。在一位名叫WolfDad的學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客上，你看到如下內(nèi)容。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容、寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和要求，給這位家長(zhǎng)回復(fù)。

I’m the father of a fourteen-year-old boy. I have a rule for my son: be among the top 3 students or get punished in one way or another. He has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on him. Am I wrong?

寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1. 表明自己的看法；

2. 陳述自己的理由（可舉例說(shuō)明）；

3. 提出至少兩條建議。

寫(xiě)作要求：1. 短文字?jǐn)?shù)不少于120（不含已寫(xiě)好的部分）；

2. 內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)意連貫；   3. 書(shū)寫(xiě)須清晰、工整。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Hi, WolfDad,

What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.

Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, health and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.

So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice. More importantly, let him live like a lovely boy; let him have more friends and social activities; and let him make mistakes of his own as we teenagers often do.

【解析】本文是一篇博客的回復(fù)，這對(duì)于學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)可能有點(diǎn)陌生。但所寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容跟學(xué)生很貼近，很多學(xué)生可能也經(jīng)歷了相似的事情，可以想象對(duì)自己的父母說(shuō)出自己的心里話。說(shuō)出懲罰對(duì)學(xué)生的帶來(lái)的影響。最后一定要提出自己的建議。