Question

【題目】假定你是學生李華，最近，學校打算為同學們制作統(tǒng)一的校服，請你給閆校長寫一封建議信，要點如下：

1.寫信的目的 2.對校服的布料，款式等提出建議并說明理由。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右； 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫的；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr. Yan,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Yan ,

Knowing that our school will order uniform for us, I am writing to make some suggestions.

Our uniform is worn almost every day, so it would be great if you could understand what students like. First of all, I’d prefer it to be made of cotton because cotton feels soft and is good for our skin. Second, It’s tiring to see the same clothes everywhere at school, so please let boys and girls have different uniforms . Third, I suggest that you provide four or five styles for us to choose from. All students can vote and choose their favorite styles.

I’d be honored if you could take my suggestions into consideration.

【解析】試題分析：試題為應(yīng)用文中的書信寫作，試題只給出寫作框架，并未給出所有的具體寫作細節(jié)，為半開放性寫作。寫好此文，需注意三點：一是寫信格式要準確，信的開頭已經(jīng)給出，但切要寫好信的結(jié)尾。二是要詳略得當，本文應(yīng)重點寫的是（１）寫信的目的 （２）對校服的布料，款式等提出建議并說明理由。三要注意適當?shù)卦黾蛹毠?jié)，恰當?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。另外，在寫作時要注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用。

【亮點說明】本文是一篇英文書信。書信格式正確，要點齊全，層次分明，布局合理，運用高級句子。Our uniform is worn nearly every day, so it would be great if you could understand what students like.被動語態(tài)，并列句和賓語從句完美結(jié)合；I’d prefer it to be made cotton because cotton feels soft and is good for our skin.句中使用原因狀語從句；Third, I suggest that you provide four or five styles for us to choose from. All students can vote and choose their favorite styles.suggest后面用含虛擬語氣的賓語從句（should）+動詞原形；I’d be honored if you could take my suggestions into consideration.被動語態(tài)和if引導的條件狀語從句出現(xiàn)在句中；另外，First of all, Second, Third,為文章增色添彩。