Question

你接受了一項(xiàng)寫(xiě)作任務(wù)，要為英語(yǔ)校報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇人物介紹。

［寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容］
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息，介紹一位人物
［寫(xiě)作要求］
只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。
「評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)］
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     

Answer 1

Chris Stack, 34, a brave British man，whose health condition was so bad that he was warned three times by doctors that he would be dying, has been operated on his lung and heart. In spite of that, Chris tried to live longer to accompany his wife and children. Five years ago, he decided to take part in the running training and he has joined in many competitions of different levels. Now he is preparing himself for the Great Birmingham Run. All people think he is becoming healthier and more and more confident.

試題分析：寫(xiě)好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中出現(xiàn)了常用的詞組：In spite of 雖然，take part in 參加，competitions of different levels.各種水平的比賽，prepare sb for sth“使某人做好…的準(zhǔn)備”，好的句型有： Chris Stack, 34, a brave British man，whose health condition was so bad that he was warned three times by doctors that he would be dying, has been operated on his lung and heart.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句，so…that…句型。