Question

1．最近校園欺凌事件再次成為輿論焦點(diǎn)，你們班也開展了相關(guān)討論．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)以"Say NO to School-bullying"為題，為學(xué)校網(wǎng)站寫一篇英語(yǔ)文章，內(nèi)容包括：
1．欺凌行為的危害；
2．提出至少兩條建議，號(hào)召一起努力阻止校園暴力．
注意：1．內(nèi)容包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；
2．詞數(shù)100左右．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息最近校園欺凌事件再次成為輿論焦點(diǎn)，你們班也開展了相關(guān)討論．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)以"Say NO to School-bullying"為題，為學(xué)校網(wǎng)站寫一篇英語(yǔ)文章，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：欺凌行為的危害；提出至少兩條建議，號(hào)召一起努力阻止校園暴力． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：First of all首先；try every effort to 努力去做；drop out of 輟學(xué)；answer violence with violence以暴制暴；deal with應(yīng)對(duì)，處理；More importantly更重要的是；pay more attention to更多關(guān)注；All in all總之；keep away from遠(yuǎn)離
Our class had a heated discussion and we have reached some agreements on how to solve the problem．（高分句型一）
First of all，we should try every effort to prevent school-bullying happening for more and more students would drop out of school if their personal safely could not be guaranteed．（高分句型二）
More importantly，the whole society should pay more attention to both physical and mental health of adolescents．（高分句型三）

解答 Recently，school-bullying is a hot topic again．Students showed their fear and parents and teachers also expressed their great concern about it．Our class had a heated discussion and we have reached some agreements on how to solve the problem．（高分句型一）
       First of all，we should try every effort to prevent school-bullying happening for more and more students would drop out of school if their personal safely could not be guaranteed．（高分句型二）Next，if we meet with school-bulling，we should not answer violence with violence，because it will result in more fighting．（欺凌行為的危害）Instead，we should tell our teachers or parents about it．They will help us deal with it well and protect us from the bad guys．More importantly，the whole society should pay more attention to both physical and mental health of adolescents．（高分句型三）（建議）
       All in all，every student should behave himself and keep away from school-bullying．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．