Question

假如你是李華，最近你校同學(xué)就如何對(duì)待公共場所吸煙、吐痰等不文明行為展開了討論。大家的不同意見主要在于是該提醒還是該罰款。下表是討論的結(jié)果和雙方理由，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表中提供的信息給某英文報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀介紹討論的情況。

大多數(shù)同學(xué)認(rèn)為	其他同學(xué)認(rèn)為
應(yīng)該提醒； 違章者可能并沒有看到警示牌。 警示可以幫助他們意識(shí)到所犯的錯(cuò)誤，并自覺改正。	應(yīng)適當(dāng)罰款。 一般來說，人們會(huì)從教訓(xùn)中學(xué)會(huì)遵守規(guī)則； 違章者通常是“貫犯”，提醒他們通常已不再起作用。

詞匯： 吐痰spit/ 罰款 fine      文章開頭已經(jīng)寫好

Dear Editor,

       I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about how to deal with bad behaviors in public, like smoking and spitting. This is, to remind or to fine.  _____________________________                                        

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Answer 1

Dear Editor,

       I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about how to deal with bad behaviors in public, like smoking and spitting. This is, to remind or to fine.

       The majority of us are for reminders. They think that those who have done something wrong may not have noticed the warning signs. And reminders will surely help them to realize their mistakes and correct them willingly.

       However, the others think these people should be fined because, generally speaking, people will not learn to obey rules unless they are taught a lesson. What’s more, those who go against the rules are usually frequent wrong-doers. Reminders won’t work on them any longer. Meanwhile they suggest these people should be fined properly.

解析:

文筆要非常流暢，要把握所有要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)以“我”為中心，詳細(xì)說明自己對(duì)志愿者工作的理解，以此來表達(dá)自己的決心。要用詞恰當(dāng)，表現(xiàn)要比較充分，具備一定的說服力。詞匯和語句的運(yùn)用要正確。