Question

4．請根據(jù)下列表格中所提供的材料，結(jié)合你的生活經(jīng)歷，展開想象，以學(xué)生的身份用英語寫一篇短文．注意：1．不要逐句翻譯；2．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．



We all have some keys in life，some visible and others invisible．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"圖表+提綱類"形式，根據(jù)文章所給提示信息和自己的生活經(jīng)歷展開想象寫一篇短文，闡述有關(guān)有形的鑰匙和無形的鑰匙．寫作要點：1．有形的鑰匙；2無形的鑰匙；3．總結(jié)概括．既是提綱作文又是圖表類作文．
寫作時時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．人稱以第一和第三人稱為主．
重要短語：feel upset  （令人感到煩惱），listen to the teachers （聽老師講課），open the door of （打開…之門），tap the potential of （挖掘…的潛力），in a word （總之），It's convenient for us to do （做某事對某人來說是方便的），betroublesome（ 麻煩的），ownsth （擁有某物），a meaningful way of （做某事的一個有意義的方法）．
【高分句型】
1．From writing，we have a key to tapping the potential of our own，finding another colorful world and realizing a meaningful way of learning and living．這里是由兩個并列的現(xiàn)在分詞短語finding another colorful world and realizing a meaningful way of learning and living作狀語，主句為we have a key to tapping the potential of our own，主句的主語為we與所給動詞find和realize存在邏輯上的主動關(guān)系．
2．To us students，it's perhaps more important to own a key to opening the gate of wisdom．這里是主語從句，it作形式主語，其結(jié)構(gòu)為"It+be+形容詞+to do sth"．

解答 We all have some keys in life，some visible and othersinvisible．In our daily life，it's necessary and convenient for us to take thevisible ones．If we are careless to lose them，we'll feel upset and our lifemay be troublesome．（有形的鑰匙）
．In fact，some invisible keys are also important to us in ourlife．As students，we study at school every day．By listening to the teachers，we own a key to research and discussion，and to learning how to get knowledge．Through reading，we get a key to opening the door of mystery and sharing theideas of great people of the past and the present．From writing，we have a keyto tapping the potential of our own，finding another colorful world andrealizing a meaningful way of learning and living．【高分句型】（無形的鑰匙）
In a word，the two kinds of keys are equallynecessary in our life．To us students，it's perhaps more important to own a keyto opening the gate of wisdom．【高分句型】（總結(jié)概括）

點評 寫好這類圖表及提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點完整地表述出來，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點，發(fā)揮想象，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等．