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14．假如你是李華，"母親節(jié)"在即，你班將舉行一次"學(xué)會(huì)感恩"的主題班會(huì)．現(xiàn)在請你以感恩父母為話題，結(jié)合以下要點(diǎn)，以書信的形式把你想說的話寫給父母．
內(nèi)容提示：（1）感謝父母的養(yǎng)育之恩；
          （2）回憶父母的艱辛；
          （3）請父母放心…
注意：（1）字?jǐn)?shù)在100字左右；
      （2）開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
      （3）可根據(jù)情況增減細(xì)節(jié)，詳略得當(dāng)．
Dear Mum and Dad，
   How I love you!
Thank you very much for giving me life and bringing me up!（感謝父母的養(yǎng)育之恩）；In order to provide me with a better life，I know how many hardships you have experienced，getting up early and staying up late，to earn every coin to cover my schooling and my life expenses．【高分句型一】You hope I can enter a good college and get a good job in the future．However，I was always doing something wrong that made you upset，so I must say sorry to you．（回憶父母的艱辛）
Mum and Dad，don't worry about me now because I've grown up!I will study hard，keep fit and form good habits．Never will I do anything disappointing．【高分句型二】I will learn as much as I can to get better exam results and realize my dream．I'm sure you'll be proud of me soon!（請父母放心…）
Your son，
 Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文為書信，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意格式．在回憶父母的艱辛?xí)r，用過去時(shí)態(tài)；其他時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主．人稱以第一人稱為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．感謝父母的養(yǎng)育之恩．2．回憶父母的艱辛．3．請父母放心…
重點(diǎn)短語和句型：
bring up  將某人撫養(yǎng)大
in order to 為了
hardship 艱難時(shí)刻
upset 失望的
句型一：
In order to provide me with a better life，I know how many hardships you have experienced，getting up early and staying up late，to earn every coin to cover my schooling and my life expenses．
in order to作目的狀語，getting up early and staying up late 分詞做插入語，表示補(bǔ)充說明，to earn every coin to cover my schooling and my life expenses動(dòng)詞不定式表目的．
句型二：
Never will I do anything disappointing．
以否定詞never開頭的倒裝句．

解答 Dear Mum and Dad，
       How I love you!Thank you very much for giving me life and bringing me up!（感謝父母的養(yǎng)育之恩）；In order to provide me with a better life，I know how many hardships you have experienced，getting up early and staying up late，to earn every coin to cover my schooling and my life expenses．【高分句型一】You hope I can enter a good college and get a good job in the future．However，I was always doing something wrong that made you upset，so I must say sorry to you．（回憶父母的艱辛）
       Mum and Dad，don't worry about me now because I've grown up!I will study hard，keep fit and form good habits．Never will I do anything disappointing．【高分句型二】I will learn as much as I can to get better exam results and realize my dream．I'm sure you'll be proud of me soon!（請父母放心…）
                                                                                                                                                                                        Your son，
                                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．