Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面四幅圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇短文，記述昨天發(fā)生在你叔叔身上的事。

注意：1.詞數(shù)120以上。2.參考詞匯：吊銷(xiāo)駕照　 revoke a driving license

 

Answer 1

【答案】

My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday.

Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends. He was so glad

that he drank a lot of beer. As a result he got drunk. After the meal, his friends tried to persuade him not to drive home, but he didn’t listen to them, saying “No problem” and insisted on doing so. He got into the car and drove away. A few minutes later, he was winding his way in the street when his car ran into a tall tree. He was badly injured but still alive. The police came to the scene, and he was taken to hospital. Unfortunately he had to stay in hospital for several days .Worse still, he was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked.

How he regretted what he had done!

【解析】

試題分析：本文記敘的是叔叔酒后駕車(chē)引起事故的故事。在審題的時(shí)候，注意本文的時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，可以把要點(diǎn)分為四點(diǎn)，朋友聚餐喝酒；結(jié)束以后和朋友道別；駕車(chē)出了事故；接受警察的教育。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

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