Question

近年微博（microblog）在中國(guó)越來(lái)越流行，2011年也被有關(guān)媒體稱(chēng)為“微博元年”。假設(shè)你是校報(bào)記者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示為校報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇介紹微博的英語(yǔ)短文。
1.非常方便，人們可以隨時(shí)利用微博來(lái)表達(dá)心聲，交流想法；
2.給人們提供了一種釋放壓力的方式； 3.與朋友分享心情，增進(jìn)了解；
4.也有潛在的危險(xiǎn)，有可能泄露個(gè)人隱私或其他重要信息；
5.綜上所述，使用微博要謹(jǐn)慎。
注意：1．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加關(guān)聯(lián)詞句；
2．不可用簡(jiǎn)單的逐條列舉式翻譯，要點(diǎn)在串聯(lián)的句中體現(xiàn)；
3．詞數(shù)：100--110左右；（已給部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
Microblog has become part of our life. ____________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Microblog has become part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express their feelings instantly at any time. Besides , it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on the microblog, their friends may also know about their condition and can offer timely comfort.
However, microblog can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people’s privacy and other significant information. All in all, microblog provides us with some concerns as well as comfort and large quantities of information, so we should be careful while using it.

試題分析：本題是材料作文。所有要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，作文必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，不能簡(jiǎn)單的逐字逐句翻譯，要有連貫性。盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯，多使用短語(yǔ)和從句，來(lái)增加作文的亮點(diǎn)。注意不能出現(xiàn) 拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。
亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：范文使用了較多的連接詞，像Besides，However，All in all，so 等，使作文比較連貫。范文使用了較多的短語(yǔ)和句型，如It is very convenient for people to...，give away，provides us with，as well as，large quantities of等。顯示了作者較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言功底。