Question

假設(shè)你是李越，你的澳大利亞筆友Eileen最近沉迷于(be addicted to)電腦游戲而不能自拔，嚴重影響了學習和身心健康。請你用英語給她寫一封書信說明沉迷電腦的害處，勸說她戒掉這一不良習慣。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右； 2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫通順。

Dear Eileen,

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Yours, Li Yue

Answer 1

Dear Eileen,

I am writing to give you my advice that you should give up playing computer games.

Being addicted to computer games can be harmful to you in many ways. To begin with, it will waste too much valuable time which should be spent on your study or other beneficial things. In addition, playing games for a long time will do harm to your health, especially to your eyes. Worse still, some games are full of unhealthy things, which will be of great harm to your mental health.

I strongly hope that you can consider my suggestion and break away from computer games as soon as possible.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Yue

【解析】

試題分析：分析要求可知，假設(shè)你是李越，你的澳大利亞筆友Eileen最近沉迷于(be addicted to)電腦游戲而不能自拔，嚴重影響了學習和身心健康。請你用英語給她寫一封書信說明沉迷電腦的害處，勸說她戒掉這一不良習慣。。短文應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，第一人稱和第三人稱。詞數(shù)100左右，不要太多或太少。盡量多使用較高級的詞匯和短語以及固定句式，注意句子之間的連貫性。

【亮點說明】 文中用了一些高級的短語和句式。如：Being addicted to引導(dǎo)的非謂語動詞、that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句，which引導(dǎo)的定語從句、To begin with、In addition、Worse still,等都很不錯。

考點：書信類作文。